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No Son Shine

Bursting barrel chest peacock strutting rooster crow amazed am I as you grow. Sad sorrow demise no joy for me in your eyes tension anger soulful sighs.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/8/2009 6:50:00 AM

Sorry, but those sad eyes will sparkle again. They have to. I love you. Love, Dane

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/31/2009 4:48:00 AM

The sensitivity of your words, the delicacy of your thoughts are all contained in your poem on the Himalayan Sunset featured today. That delicate sense of balance is not missing here either in the economy of thought, what a beautiful mind you have. Congratulations, love and blessings

Denis Joe

Date: 3/6/2009 1:29:00 PM

I lovely tight piece of writing. The rhyme structure works very well and the way that the lines have been composed shows that there is nothing forced in this. I love the way that it says som much with so few words. But you manage to create a very musical poem all the same!