No Smoking

I inhaled a lungful of cigarette smoke,
While waiting for the number nine,
I coughed so much I thought I’d choke.
The woman ignored the no smoking sign;
It served her right if she got a heavy fine.

Another man asked her to stop
And said his lungs deserved fresh air,
He raged so much I feared he’d drop;
But she chatted to someone who wasn’t there,
And looked at the man with a vacant stare.

For Cyndi’s You Do Understand contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 6:24 PM
Insanity takes many forms! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 4:58 PM
Great interpretation of the contest Jack and very worthy of a high score. Thanks for your always kind comments. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 8:15 AM
congrats Jack on a grand write and winn for thi top notch entry meeting the challenge so well as always luv..
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations on your 4th place win in Cyndi's 'You Do Understand" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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August 1, 2012 at 11:49 PM
Jack,, congratulations with your wonderful win in Cyndi's contest... xox~PD
Duncan Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 3:49 PM
I love this,,,, it's just how I feel when I see someone smoking,,, you have a great day ;}
O'Leary Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 4:36 AM
You certainly clear the air with this one! Good poem... Good luck... Terry (& thanks for your kind comments)
Wesley Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 8:32 PM
Clever entry Jack, reminds me I used to puff too and how painful it was to quit! All the best in the contest my friend!
Grisetti Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 3:39 PM
Brilliant entry for the contest. Well thought out quintain.
Sivey Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 2:00 PM
Wow, Jack, this is really an awesome write! I've seen people like this old woman! I feel sorry for them! Your poem was very delightful to read...it flowed so well and concluded brilliantly! Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:44 PM
Reads like a winner..Good work and good luck..Thanks for reviewing my work..Sara
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