No Sleep

Chemical Electrical Hormonal Emotional Physical IMBALANCES Some are like walking zombies Some are like little human beasts Some are like out of this world creatures Some are ticking time bombs Some know they are there, but they are not there Deprived Inadequate Tension Stress Cramps Risks MATTER please close those eyes and sleep

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Ian Jones

Date: 9/3/2015 7:51:00 AM

Nice quirky write but it should have the title Ian's Normal State, lol. Kind regards, Ian

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/3/2015 8:00:00 AM

Lol Ian. My state of mind/life pushed me to write this. Ive experienced 1st hand to what luck of sleep can do. Thanks Ian

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2015 9:56:00 PM

so much contributes to sleepless nights, you've captured it well, enjoyed your write:)

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/3/2015 7:56:00 AM

Thank you Poet Destroyer:-)