No Sleep

Chemical
  Electrical
    Hormonal
      Emotional 
        Physical 
          IMBALANCES  

Some are like walking zombies 
Some are like little human beasts
Some are like out of this world creatures
Some are ticking time bombs
Some know they are there, but they are not there

Deprived 
  Inadequate 
    Tension
      Stress
        Cramps
          Risks
            MATTER

please close those eyes and sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Jones Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 7:51 AM
Nice quirky write but it should have the title Ian's Normal State, lol. Kind regards, Ian
Hunjeri Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 8:00 AM
Lol Ian. My state of mind/life pushed me to write this. Ive experienced 1st hand to what luck of sleep can do. Thanks Ian
A   Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 9:56 PM
so much contributes to sleepless nights, you've captured it well, enjoyed your write:)
Hunjeri Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 7:56 AM
Thank you Poet Destroyer:-)
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