No Self Control

Fudgy was Pudgy
little too much pudding pie
damn that stuff is good
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Beaufort Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 9:20 AM
Yes, you indicate the difficulty of diet very succinctly.
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 1:36 PM
ha. that was fun!
Hughes Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 8:09 AM
Thanks Andrea!!
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