No Room

In the womb there was no room 
 for a babe to thrive and bloom. 

 By the will of God conceived, as 
 a regretful burden perceived 

 by a single mom who can't comprehend 
 generational blessings she's chosen to end. 

 Fearful tears drip down. Who could care? 
 She feels so trapped, but the clinic is there. 

 "It's not human yet," "You'll feel relieved." 
 Each familiar-as-Hitler lie is believed. 

 As time elapses, the loss has begotten 
 trauma and shame that won't be forgotten. 

 In the womb there was no room. 
 The chamber of life became an empty tomb. 

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 In the inn there was no room
 for the babe in Mary's womb. 

 By the spirit of God conceived, 
 in a filthy manger received 

 to a virgin mother whose eyes behold 
 the very Savior the prophets foretold! 

 With joyful tears, she praises the Lord. 
 Though fearful, she chooses to trust His word, 

 believing her Jesus' blood sacrifice 
 would pardon her sin and give her new life. 

 His cruel death was mocked, but Jesus is risen 
 for generations of sinners, forever forgiven! 

 In the inn there was no room. 
 From the chamber of death, life rose from the tomb!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Brenner Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 9:32 PM
This is awsum..altho, very tragic and dark with gloom...which is great in any write..a new beginning with the end..turns dark to bright. ;-)
Ligon Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 11:24 PM
Thanks, Kenneth.
Na Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 3:17 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Juliet
Ligon Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 11:24 PM
Thanks, Gregory.
Chiri Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Congrats on a fine win!;)
Ligon Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 11:24 PM
Thanks, Brenda.
A  Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 3:17 PM
Juliet, CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT
Ligon Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Thanks, SKAT. You too!
Deschler Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 2:28 PM
A very inspirational poem with a powerful message. Very well expressed, Juliet! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem.
Ligon Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 3:45 PM
Thanks, Kelly. www.40daysforlife.com
Mehta Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 1:09 AM
Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win, Juliet
Ligon Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 3:43 PM
Thanks, Dr.
May Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 9:25 PM
congrats on a great win Juliet..
Ligon Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 3:42 PM
Thanks, Joseph. www.40daysforlife.com
A   Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 9:04 PM
Hi Juliet, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. I will miss you, have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA
Ligon Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 11:49 PM
Thanks so much, Linda! Miss me? Are you going away? Hugs and kisses, Juliet.
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December 28, 2013 at 8:26 AM
amen, awesome write, and awesome how we being the dirty manger the lord would come and dwell within us that me might reveal his sons glory to a dark deceived world,,
Fraser Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 2:05 AM
This is sooo very good Juliet, I love the comparisons youve portrayed here, very creative and very powerful, i wrote a poem called Whats Lost that you might enjoy similar to your first portrayal, merry Christmas,Carl
A   Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 1:36 AM
Juliet, Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 1:01 AM
what a contrast this carries! As Joseph says, a powerful piece !! Merry Christmas to you, sweetie.
May Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 7:22 PM
the comparison was powerful Juliet....awesome piece...Merry Christmas
Guzzi Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 6:44 PM
Every new life brings again the hope of redemption. Happy Holidays Light & Love
Horsch Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 5:04 PM
Now Juliet, This is a masterpiece. You are truly blessed. Just a wonderful poem....Hugs....Roger
Horne Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 4:36 PM
very clever write
Melugin Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 9:56 PM
Juliet......Sacred And Stellar!! Life.....meant to be experienced! Merry Christmas, chuck.......ps...if u have time pleased check out: " All They Could Have Been" on my page, thanks
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