Vince Suzadail Jr. Poet Rhyme

No Right

There’s not a lot that I can say
I feel Your Presence every day
Sometimes I lie awake at night
I worry but I have no right
I complain when things go wrong
I forget others whose woes are strong
You heal the blind and give them sight
For me to complain, I have no right
Sometimes my faith is put to the test
I stop to think how I was blessed
In my darkness You sent me light
To ask for more, I have no right
You walked on the Sea of Galilee
On the Cross You died for me
Oh Lord please help me win this fight
To give up now, I have no right
So many times I did not heed
You were with me in my hour of need
I have felt Your Love and feared Your Might
To see these miracles I have no right.

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Lawrence Ingle December 24, 2008 at 8:13 PM What a beauty. Great way of saying it. I love it. It's truly wonderful..You sure are gifted..Your friend Lawrence in Lou.

Keith Bickerstaffe December 12, 2008 at 1:43 PM How unworthy we feel in His presence... His is the only Perfection... we straggle along so far behind. An exceptional piece my friend! God bless, Keith

Celeste Butler-Mendez December 5, 2008 at 6:44 AM Another insightful work. Well done.

Aleera De La Keur November 19, 2008 at 10:42 PM Your words of wisdom haunt some earlier times when i have complained and griped!!! Thanks for the comments...Aleera

Robin L. Gass November 17, 2008 at 8:08 PM I want to thank you for your kind words and encouragment. After I read your comment this beautiful tribute to Christ was the first poem I read. I look forward to reading more. God bless you and the kids you work with. Robin

John Loving Iii November 14, 2008 at 8:21 AM this is a nice piece. i try to write tributes like this but sometimes i get lost and the paper ends up in the trash. but i do have one piece called " My summer vacation" tell me what you think. john

Nita Martin November 13, 2008 at 8:21 PM Very moving and so sweet I Love this write thank you so much for sharing it with us your friend Nita

Anna Kittrell November 13, 2008 at 9:17 AM Love it. Great work. Funny you used the words, "nostalgia freak" to describe yourself. I always describe myself as being in a "constant state of nostalgia"

Brian Strand November 12, 2008 at 11:34 PM Beautifyl prayerful words Vince.Rgds Brian

Deneen White November 12, 2008 at 2:53 PM you my dear friend have earned the right, through the heavenly father, such a blessed and elegant write filled with passion, sincereity, and compassion, he is the one who forgives in a large way, but it is also nice to know that you are being humble for this is the key to the Lord's heart, great heart-felt write take care D-ncye

Michael Torres November 12, 2008 at 4:21 AM Vince this is wonderful. Very touching I can relate to this excellent piece. The Lord looked down and smiled on you for this one. God bless you and your's Michael Torres

Janetta Harrington November 12, 2008 at 3:16 AM well you do have a right. i love, love, this one vince. i laughted when i saw your response to a poem i wrote .... that you werer scared. that was really funny. thanks, and take care janetta.

Sue Mason November 11, 2008 at 6:45 PM You have as much right as He did, oh brother mine. You're looking at a miracle every time you look in the mirror, my friend. Love does not ask for rights ... it just gives and thank you for all the laughter you've given me here at the Soup!!

Sharon Winter November 11, 2008 at 4:20 PM I think most of us have felt this way and can relate very well. Sounds like many prayers I have said myself, although not so eloquently as you have penned here. Hope you are not going through any seriously difficult times, and if you are, may all your prayers be answered. Love, shar

Donald Meikle November 11, 2008 at 2:55 PM Me either mate. Life's been AOK so far.

Carrie Richards November 11, 2008 at 10:51 AM You have spoken here, what I've often thought to myself in the middle of the night. Times when I've said "Please, God..help me through this"....but then, I must think how in so many ways I've already been so blessed...and then know I have no right to ask for more. You said it so well! .. Blessings, Carrie

James Foulk November 11, 2008 at 10:38 AM a touching piece of poetry Vince, moves the heart. thank you for reading my recent poems and for your comments.

Diane Christian November 11, 2008 at 10:07 AM aww this is beautiful written, we are all truly blessed by His Gift of love and eternal life, this poem is so powerful, But in his eyes you have every right through the blood of Jesus, you have rights because you believe, you are a son of God and an air to the throne, you are loved just the way you are, none of us have no right but because of Jesus we have everything, thanks for your feed back on my poem a breath of fresh air, God bless you.

Dorian Petersen Potter November 11, 2008 at 9:42 AM This so beautiful Vince!Thank God for sending His beloved son Jesus, for His sacrifice.Because of this there's redemption,forgiveness,salvation and hope for all of us.God is so awesome indeed!Love and blessings! D.