No Redemption

I lay with no redemption upon broken strings of empty promises...


by Deb Radke


for the 'One Amazing Line' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Scripca Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 7:24 PM
Great Monoku here, dear Deb. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 3:03 PM
Great one..Congratulations..Sara
Roberts Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:41 AM
wonderful entry, congrats on your win in the contest Deb
Cwiak Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:33 AM
Great emotional imagery here, Deb. Congrats on your win. Dan C
Haick Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:13 AM
Amazing one line, Deb! Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest! Love, Audrey
Duffin Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 6:50 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon
Onclaud Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 3:40 AM
best wishes on your well-deserved award! enjoy… nette
Mannan Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 10:51 PM
Wow Deb. Many congratulations for this win.
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 9:47 PM
A dark one here. I like it, Deb. Congratulations in this contest. LUv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 5:43 PM
Much congratulations Deb on your poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
Fraser Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 2:17 PM
Many congratulations Deb on your win with this wonderful poetry. Most deserved of it's win in Constance's fine contest >> James :)
Brown Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 5:39 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 7:37 AM
Nice thought,
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December 6, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Powerful thought in this monoku, Deb. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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December 6, 2010 at 6:58 AM
Now this is an amazing line... well done and best wishes in the contest...Michael
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