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No Redemption

I lay with no redemption upon broken strings of empty promises... by Deb Radke for the 'One Amazing Line' contest

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Iolanda Scripca

Date: 12/16/2010 7:24:00 PM

Great Monoku here, dear Deb. Congratulations on a well deserved win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 3:03:00 PM

Great one..Congratulations..Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/15/2010 8:41:00 AM

wonderful entry, congrats on your win in the contest Deb

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/15/2010 8:33:00 AM

Great emotional imagery here, Deb. Congrats on your win. Dan C

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2010 8:13:00 AM

Amazing one line, Deb! Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest! Love, Audrey

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/15/2010 6:50:00 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/15/2010 3:40:00 AM

best wishes on your well-deserved award! enjoy… nette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/14/2010 10:51:00 PM

Wow Deb. Many congratulations for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2010 9:47:00 PM

A dark one here. I like it, Deb. Congratulations in this contest. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 12/14/2010 5:43:00 PM

Much congratulations Deb on your poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 12/14/2010 2:17:00 PM

Many congratulations Deb on your win with this wonderful poetry. Most deserved of it's win in Constance's fine contest >> James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2010 5:39:00 AM

Congratulations Deb on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 7:37:00 AM

Nice thought,

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2010 7:26:00 AM

Powerful thought in this monoku, Deb. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/6/2010 6:58:00 AM

Now this is an amazing line... well done and best wishes in the contest...Michael