No Redemption

I lay with no redemption upon broken strings of empty promises...


by Deb Radke


for the 'One Amazing Line' contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/16/2010 7:24:00 PM
Great Monoku here, dear Deb. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
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Date: 12/16/2010 3:03:00 PM
Great one..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:41:00 AM
wonderful entry, congrats on your win in the contest Deb
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:33:00 AM
Great emotional imagery here, Deb. Congrats on your win. Dan C
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:13:00 AM
Amazing one line, Deb! Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/15/2010 6:50:00 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest. Eamon
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Date: 12/15/2010 3:40:00 AM
best wishes on your well-deserved award! enjoy… nette
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Date: 12/14/2010 10:51:00 PM
Wow Deb. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/14/2010 9:47:00 PM
A dark one here. I like it, Deb. Congratulations in this contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/14/2010 5:43:00 PM
Much congratulations Deb on your poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/14/2010 2:17:00 PM
Many congratulations Deb on your win with this wonderful poetry. Most deserved of it's win in Constance's fine contest >> James :)
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Date: 12/14/2010 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 7:37:00 AM
Nice thought,
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Date: 12/6/2010 7:26:00 AM
Powerful thought in this monoku, Deb. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/6/2010 6:58:00 AM
Now this is an amazing line... well done and best wishes in the contest...Michael
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