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No Rain

Two thousand green leaves
I need to love you, said clouds
I gaze on my thorns
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June19/2017

Copyright © Probir Gupta | Year Posted 2017

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June 22, 2017 at 3:16 PM

Excellent Haiku,Probir, rain is a blessing to nurture our gardens ~*

June 22, 2017 at 9:02 PM

Thank you, Eve ...

June 19, 2017 at 5:08 PM

All of us I think love rains.your desire is clearly brought out why thorns you will enjoy more rains. Probir please take the trouble of reviewing my new additions.

June 22, 2017 at 10:23 PM

Thank you ... I'll do ... Give me a little time ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 19, 2017 at 12:50 PM

Use the rain dance, I heard is very useful! Haha!Lovely and clever Haiku dear, Probir! Hope you get as much rain as you need!

June 22, 2017 at 10:24 PM

Thank you ...

June 19, 2017 at 9:06 AM

Good one, Probir:) Thorns is not good Hope you get some rain:)

June 19, 2017 at 12:30 PM

May your hope materialize! ... Thank you ...

June 19, 2017 at 7:26 AM

Enjoyed as much as the refreshing rain Probir!:-) hugs Jan xx

June 19, 2017 at 12:31 PM

So nice of you, Jan ... Thank you ...

June 19, 2017 at 7:01 AM

Nicely done, Probir! Enjoy your day

June 19, 2017 at 12:32 PM

Thank you, White ...

June 19, 2017 at 6:01 AM

I like the second line of this nice Haiku you wrote Probir. (and I guess we can send you some rain from here, since we have so much this Spring) :)

June 19, 2017 at 12:33 PM

I envy you ! ?.. Thank you ...

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