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No Place Quite Like It

              faucets drip
                radiators rattle
              hinges creak
                dad’s in the saddle

              lights blink
                a/c blows
              stove’s aflame
                off mom goes

              shower’s cold
                 sister scolds 
               true shalom 
                 ~ happy home

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/26/2024 8:43:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun/cute "home" write. So True... "Home Sweet Home" as they say. Thanks for the laugh.... Have a great day writing away...............

John Lawless

Date: 6/26/2024 4:04:00 AM

ya got that right Gershon....and a take a number bathroom wait also....