No Perfection

The sunset comes, the sunset goes.
The open air begins to close.
The perfect day you wish had been
Was perfectly ruined once again.
The sun was shining hot on the ground. 
The wind was whirling round and round.
Space between you and the world,
Began to part into the cold.
Dark cold began to leave a trace
Of the deep darkness that led to space.
Space is you, and you alone.
Once again left in the cold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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February 8, 2017 at 12:30 AM
Nobody's perfect lol...and perfect nobodies make great companions lol...great verse my friend...god bless...^WW^
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