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No Peeking

Come my love Take my hand Close your eyes I'll help you stand Now don't you look I know it's hard But try your best In that regard You may just feel Upon your cheek A little kiss But still don't peek And if you feel Behind your neck Something soft It's just a peck The moon is out It has a pull Draws me to you You're beautiful I won't resist I won't say no Wait what's that? I think it's snow

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Jeanette Swan

Date: 12/31/2023 4:36:00 AM

I like the sweetness of this poem, the gentle invitation and the play on 'kiss' with the snow. The form is beautiful, with the short lines, and alternate rhyme that never jars, just falls like the snow. I love this poem. I can imagine that it was written for a particular person who is precious to you. That is what makes sing :)

Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 1/1/2024 2:25:00 AM

Thank you

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 12/30/2023 12:53:00 AM

A lovely poem. Well done.

Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 12/30/2023 10:44:00 PM

Thank you