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No One's There

I sit by the phone waiting I call time after time again Counting each ring as they go unanswerd Tonight there's no voice to confort me No one to say "I love you". My time is up, and I hang up My heart aches, as my tears fall I wanted to say "I miss you". As I sit by the phone waiting

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/13/2016 10:40:00 PM

mary, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/31/2011 5:24:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Mary. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Larry Colvin

Date: 5/28/2011 2:38:00 PM

Another poem of pain and passion!... It's a sad refrain Mary!... And the way it is, not even a leprechaun with all its magic could wipe away those tears, and make your life better.... I suggest you fill up your house with phones, phones and more phones, until all that ringing creates an echo in your head; until you realize that time is really on your side. Step away Mary, and let time gently pass. Sincerely Larry Colvin Lawrence the poet

Constance La France

Date: 5/28/2011 7:53:00 AM

This poem is full of deep emotion of love lost, one day you will find a perfect love, a wonderful write and welcome to poetrysoup~~

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2011 8:26:00 PM

dont wait to long plenty of fish in the sea that will treat you better

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/27/2011 6:33:00 PM

Lovely expressions of yearnig of love, mary