No One Cares

smell of the ocean
sand in between my toes
laughter of toddlers
colorful umbrellas
i watch an old man eat a sandwich
His fly is unzipped
no one cares
it is summer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hawkins Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 7:41 PM
I had a real sense of being there. I really enjoyed your very carefree poem. Made me feel unzipped for awhile. Thank you, Caren
Krutsinger Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 7:09 AM
I like being unzipped myself Shirley
Rose  Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 3:03 PM
He is letting in the breeze for his little bird, lol,
Krutsinger Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Hilarious
Bauer Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 11:56 AM
ha! only a poet would be able to work that observation into the written word! well done, caren!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Thank you Ilene
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