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No One Cares

smell of the ocean sand in between my toes laughter of toddlers colorful umbrellas i watch an old man eat a sandwich His fly is unzipped no one cares it is summer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 8/21/2021 7:41:00 PM
I had a real sense of being there. I really enjoyed your very carefree poem. Made me feel unzipped for awhile. Thank you, Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/22/2021 7:09:00 AM
I like being unzipped myself Shirley
Date: 8/21/2021 3:03:00 PM
He is letting in the breeze for his little bird, lol,
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/22/2021 7:10:00 AM
Hilarious
Date: 8/21/2021 11:56:00 AM
ha! only a poet would be able to work that observation into the written word! well done, caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/22/2021 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Ilene

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