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No One At the Window

Drapeless window cries
Laughter turns to emptiness
U-Haul moves our lives...


by: iolanda scripca

for Michael's Contest "A Haiku From My Window"

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Demetrius Curton

January 27, 2014 at 2:38 PM

It waz deep and I felt it because I had to take a hard move to a new and wasnt easy but great poem

John Freeman

August 2, 2011 at 10:20 AM

Beautiful and smart Haiku Iolandra! Good Luck! Congratulations on your worthy poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses

Elaine George

August 2, 2011 at 4:17 AM

Superb writingIolanda. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie

Matthew Anish

July 2, 2011 at 2:46 PM

Sad tale - I believe it is about moving - am I right? Congratulations on being featured. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Rockman Pritts

June 28, 2011 at 7:30 PM

Sorry for the multiple comments. The captch kept saying it was incorrect. Rockman.

Rockman Pritts

June 28, 2011 at 7:27 PM

Congrats on your featured poem. I really enjoyed this one. Rockman.

Rockman Pritts

June 28, 2011 at 7:26 PM

Congrats on your featured poem. I really enjoyed this one. Rockman.

Laura Breidenthal

June 28, 2011 at 6:57 PM

Great one!!!

Laura Breidenthal

June 28, 2011 at 6:56 PM

Great one!!!

Ashley Plotczyk

June 28, 2011 at 6:00 PM

Touching. Congrats. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 28, 2011 at 5:41 AM

My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Iolanda

Vince Suzadail Jr.

June 27, 2011 at 6:18 PM

Congrats on the feature iolanda. A story in three lines. Vince

Judy Konos

June 27, 2011 at 6:07 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured....and wow...this is fantastic....so little says so much.....thank you

Judy Konos

June 27, 2011 at 6:06 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured....and wow...this is fantastic....so little says so much.....thank you

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 27, 2011 at 5:17 AM

Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Iolanda. Love, Carol

Cherie Durbin

April 15, 2011 at 4:52 AM

Moving day is sad...but exciting, too!

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 23, 2011 at 5:44 AM

Belated congratulations on your placement Iolanda, in the contest "An Haiku From Your Window" sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. Love, Carol

John Freeman

February 13, 2011 at 2:27 PM

Congratulations Iolanda on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

John Loving Iii

February 12, 2011 at 10:58 AM

and the outlines where pictures hung for years and years. i know the picture. jhl

Elaine George

February 9, 2011 at 4:15 AM

Sensational Senryu, dear Iolanda. Many congrats on your BIG WIN! LAINIE

Tahera Mannan

February 8, 2011 at 8:04 PM

Many congratulations for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

February 8, 2011 at 2:52 PM

This is so interesting, Yolanda. So what is the story? Is it your neighbor you see moving out? it's not you, is it? Congratulations on your big win. LUv, Andrea