No One At the Window

Drapeless window cries
Laughter turns to emptiness
U-Haul moves our lives...


by: iolanda scripca

for Michael's Contest "A Haiku From My Window"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/27/2014 2:38:00 PM
It waz deep and I felt it because I had to take a hard move to a new and wasnt easy but great poem
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:20:00 AM
Beautiful and smart Haiku Iolandra! Good Luck! Congratulations on your worthy poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/2/2011 4:17:00 AM
Superb writingIolanda. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
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Date: 7/2/2011 2:46:00 PM
Sad tale - I believe it is about moving - am I right? Congratulations on being featured. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/28/2011 7:30:00 PM
Sorry for the multiple comments. The captch kept saying it was incorrect. Rockman.
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Date: 6/28/2011 7:27:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem. I really enjoyed this one. Rockman.
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Date: 6/28/2011 7:26:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem. I really enjoyed this one. Rockman.
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:57:00 PM
Great one!!!
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:56:00 PM
Great one!!!
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:00:00 PM
Touching. Congrats. :)
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:41:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Iolanda
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:18:00 PM
Congrats on the feature iolanda. A story in three lines. Vince
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured....and wow...this is fantastic....so little says so much.....thank you
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured....and wow...this is fantastic....so little says so much.....thank you
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:52:00 AM
Moving day is sad...but exciting, too!
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Date: 2/23/2011 5:44:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your placement Iolanda, in the contest "An Haiku From Your Window" sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2011 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations Iolanda on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/12/2011 10:58:00 AM
and the outlines where pictures hung for years and years. i know the picture. jhl
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Date: 2/9/2011 4:15:00 AM
Sensational Senryu, dear Iolanda. Many congrats on your BIG WIN! LAINIE
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Date: 2/8/2011 8:04:00 PM
Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 2/8/2011 2:52:00 PM
This is so interesting, Yolanda. So what is the story? Is it your neighbor you see moving out? it's not you, is it? Congratulations on your big win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/8/2011 2:29:00 PM
I loved the angel you took in this write, thank you for supporting my contest...with love Michael
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Date: 2/8/2011 9:20:00 AM
Hi Iolanda - CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/8/2011 8:29:00 AM
Such a heart touching poem. Well deserving a winning place! Best wishes, Iolanda and congratulations!
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