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No Need For Wishing

No need for wishing We waltzed on the moon while the universe slumbered Strolled through a maze at the edge of midnight Stenciled a heart on the clouds found at sunset Painted a garden in jasmine delight Watched as the day dawned a silken mosaic Laid in the grass neath a heaven sent view Bid a farewell to our guardian angel No need for wishing, our dreams had come true 2/6/17 Written for the Chimera World Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Claudia Polydoro

Date: 2/19/2017 11:02:00 AM

Such a gorgeous poem, Chris - loved it - congrats on your placement

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 2/17/2017 5:59:00 PM

Congratulations Chris on the placement of the contest. A romantic poem.

Chris Green
Date: 2/17/2017 6:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Nayda, I am honored to have placed in your contest.

Janis Thompson

Date: 2/17/2017 3:07:00 PM

I love your images and you did an excellent job of using the words. Congratulations.

Chris Green
Date: 2/17/2017 3:12:00 PM

Thank you so very much Janis. I am happy you enjoyed this poem. I was thrilled to have placed in the contest.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/7/2017 3:41:00 PM

Laid in the grass 'neath a heaven sent view...That is a romantic description...Stencilled a heart on the clouds found at sunset..I can see this :)...So unique your writing is...

Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2017 3:46:00 PM

I just used the contest words and let them take me where they would. I am thrilled you liked how this one turned out. I appreciate you Charmaine

Darren White

Date: 2/6/2017 10:46:00 PM

It's amazing how you can make a flowing poem with so many required words! There are an awful lot of them, and you have only 16 lines, I am awed, Beautiful poetry.

Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2017 8:23:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend. I actually wrote two poems inspired by this contest, but this is the one I entered.

John Hamilton

Date: 2/6/2017 4:57:00 PM

Very nice, think we may have a winner here! Waltzing on the moon, just gave me an idea...i'll keep you posted!

Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2017 5:11:00 PM

Thanks so much John. Ok, I'll keep an eye out.

Carole Duet

Date: 2/6/2017 3:46:00 PM

This is beautiful. What wonderful visions it brings to mind. GL in the contest, Chris. Carole

Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2017 4:21:00 PM

Thank you so very much Carole. I am happy you liked this one.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/6/2017 3:36:00 PM

Beautiful!! Good luck in the contest , Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2017 4:20:00 PM

Thank you so very much Heidi.

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/6/2017 3:31:00 PM

WoW! Chris, this is a great entry for the contest them. It was uplifting and magical at the same time. The two lines "No need for wishing, our dreams had come true" summed this piece up very well.I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven.:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2017 4:20:00 PM

Thanks so very much my sweet friend, I always look forward to your visits and your kind thoughts.

Joseph May

Date: 2/6/2017 2:24:00 PM

You did a great job with the words...it flows well...Well done..

Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2017 4:19:00 PM

Thanks so much Joseph. I'm glad you liked it.