Chris Green Poet Rhyme

No Need For Wishing

No need for wishing

We waltzed on the moon
while the universe slumbered
Strolled through a maze at 
the edge of midnight

Stenciled a heart on 
the clouds found at sunset
Painted a garden 
in jasmine delight

Watched as the day dawned
a silken mosaic
Laid in the grass
neath a heaven sent view

Bid a farewell to
our guardian angel
No need for wishing,
our dreams had come true

2/6/17
Written for the Chimera World Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Claudia Polydoro February 19, 2017 at 11:02 AM Such a gorgeous poem, Chris - loved it - congrats on your placement

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores February 17, 2017 at 5:59 PM Congratulations Chris on the placement of the contest. A romantic poem. Chris Green February 17, 2017 at 6:01 PM Thank you so much Nayda, I am honored to have placed in your contest.

Janis Medders Tobechi February 17, 2017 at 3:07 PM I love your images and you did an excellent job of using the words. Congratulations. Chris Green February 17, 2017 at 3:12 PM Thank you so very much Janis. I am happy you enjoyed this poem. I was thrilled to have placed in the contest.

Charmaine Chircop February 7, 2017 at 3:41 PM Laid in the grass 'neath a heaven sent view...That is a romantic description...Stencilled a heart on the clouds found at sunset..I can see this :)...So unique your writing is... Chris Green February 7, 2017 at 3:46 PM I just used the contest words and let them take me where they would. I am thrilled you liked how this one turned out. I appreciate you Charmaine

Darren White February 6, 2017 at 10:46 PM It's amazing how you can make a flowing poem with so many required words! There are an awful lot of them, and you have only 16 lines, I am awed, Beautiful poetry. Chris Green February 7, 2017 at 8:23 AM Thanks so very much my friend. I actually wrote two poems inspired by this contest, but this is the one I entered.

John Hamilton February 6, 2017 at 4:57 PM Very nice, think we may have a winner here! Waltzing on the moon, just gave me an idea...i'll keep you posted! Chris Green February 6, 2017 at 5:11 PM Thanks so much John. Ok, I'll keep an eye out.

Carole Duet February 6, 2017 at 3:46 PM This is beautiful. What wonderful visions it brings to mind. GL in the contest, Chris. Carole Chris Green February 6, 2017 at 4:21 PM Thank you so very much Carole. I am happy you liked this one.

Heidi Sands February 6, 2017 at 3:36 PM Beautiful!! Good luck in the contest , Chris :) Chris Green February 6, 2017 at 4:20 PM Thank you so very much Heidi.

Alexis Y. February 6, 2017 at 3:31 PM WoW! Chris, this is a great entry for the contest them. It was uplifting and magical at the same time. The two lines "No need for wishing, our dreams had come true" summed this piece up very well.I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven.:-) Alexis Chris Green February 6, 2017 at 4:20 PM Thanks so very much my sweet friend, I always look forward to your visits and your kind thoughts.

Joseph May February 6, 2017 at 2:24 PM You did a great job with the words...it flows well...Well done.. Chris Green February 6, 2017 at 4:19 PM Thanks so much Joseph. I'm glad you liked it.