No Name Star

That light in sky is a no name star
It shines marvelous even though far
For me the other stars less bright are.
It is a love symbol. It is our.
Nothing is there gleaming for us more
Since that star is the eternal sign
Of our future happy and benign
With no name for light of yours and mine.
The sign of love for girl I adore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 1:02 PM
so very beautiful Mario. Congratulations on your win.
Mehta Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 1:51 AM
A romantic and well composed write, Mario. congrats
De Paz Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:55 AM
Thank you for the encouragement. I tried to compose with the rules on rhymes but following an intense internal request of my senses
Sietesantos Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 2:55 PM
What a beautiful romantic write this is! Just such a lovely piece! Bravo! Pandita
De Paz Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:58 AM
Thank you for coming, Pandita. I have only tried to write down my sentiments
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