No More Scold He Is Home

Days we had as one even though I scold
you smiled even through those days
now your father called you to hold
tears flow as my days to scold ends







2-1-14
For Dr Rams contest
Written by M.B.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Oyewole Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 4:13 PM
Nice Write, Michael! Congrats on your fine win!!!
Harper Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 7:49 PM
A father twist, cool poem, Michael, congrats!
Byte Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Thanks for visit and comments
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 9:45 AM
Michael congrats on your fine win. Nicely expressed - Connie
Byte Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Thanks for visit and comments
Kayode Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 4:52 AM
Congrats on the win Michael . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.
Byte Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Thanks for visit and comments
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 3:56 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on the fine win, michael
Mehta Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 8:09 PM
Thanks for the entry, Michael
Byte Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Dr Ram for another fine contest
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