Constance La France Poet Fibonacci

Notes About The Poem

No More Chances

 

I
gave
him a
second chance,
a third and fourth chance.
He was a smooth talker-   a fraud!
Prisoner of pretty words, I did not see the truth,
oh, I was smitten easy prey for a skilled abuser and yet I miss him still!

His
words
pretty,
charming ways,
his fierce deep kisses!
My chain  was sweet lust and desire,
it was hard to push him away-  it took all my strength.
I was smitten an easy prey for an evil man skilled at getting what he wants! 

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September 3, 2016


Poetry/Fibonacci/No More Chances
Copyright Protected, ID 16- 825-496-0
All Rights Reserved.   Written under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest, Let's Talk About It
sponsor, Richard Lamoureaux

First Place
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Submitted to the contest, Second Chances
sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron

Second Place

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Andrew Fairchild January 2, 2019 at 10:12 PM This type of poem seems so hard to write, but you make it look easy! The shape, the fibonaccci sequence, none of it distracts from, only enhances, the message. ISN'T IT TRUE!!!??? That Evil often wears a friendly face... As a friend of mine used to say, 'Strong Work!'

Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2019 at 2:12 PM I enjoyed seeing your model for us. This kind of scoundrel women often waste their time on. It's so true!! Thanks for this challenge, Constance. Great example for us.

Janice Canerdy January 1, 2019 at 11:08 PM This is VERY well-written, Constance. Janice

Jan Allison January 1, 2019 at 3:15 PM What a fabulous example, I'll try my best to have a go at this challenging form Constance:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France January 1, 2019 at 9:16 PM Jan, thank you for the compliment, I am sure you will write a beauty for me ~

Susan Ashley January 1, 2019 at 3:01 PM Dear Heart, this poetry form showcases the beauty of your poem wonderfully. A deep, powerful message delivered with compelling emotional artistry.. 'Prisoner of pretty words' - exquisite imagery.. Love this! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Constance La France January 1, 2019 at 9:17 PM Susan, thanks for the the lovely compliment and hoping you will give my contest a try ~

Constance La France January 1, 2019 at 2:50 PM Hi Friends, the tricky part of this form is that last 21 syllable line, it cannot roll over to the next line whether you center or not, it must all be on one line. Please give my Fibonacci challenge contest a whirl.