No More Blooms

You looked like you were arranging flowers in your head,
eyes appraising something I would never appreciate.

Later, I could tell by your silence that you were dumping
whole bunches of blooms - then you left,
leaving me with Baby's Breath, 
Cattails, bamboo stems,
and thin things with bumps on them;
fillers, just the left overs --- no real flowers.

Now I have so much space,
and our vase is full of wispy crap.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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October 15, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Excellent evocative piece.
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October 16, 2019 at 6:51 AM
You so funny, cheers!
Ashford Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 3:15 PM
Thanks Maureen. I hope the writing was not too flowery! Cheers.
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