No Minors Allowed - Chris Changed the Rules

Las Vegas - Nineteen eighty six I heard it was the city of the tricks A great hotel, all-you-can-eat buffet Our car was parked by the sexiest valet The show already started, the lights dim I - a Kangaroo with sleeping baby on my limb The music started, "one mile" legs and feathers An atmosphere of Cabaret with tens of Heathers The music stopped, men lowered their defenses Of topless dancers - awakened all their senses As glittered bubbles shined on all the misses " Look, Mommy, lots and lots of tzee-tzees !"
for Miranda's Contest " Burlesque Boutique"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 12:02 PM
Nice one Iolanda, good luck in Miranda's contest....:)
Foulk Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 11:26 AM
a great creative piece of poetry, enjoyed reading it. thank you for reading The Old Train Depot and for your comment. I also enjoyed you telling me about your Grandpa and your family. this train depot was only about five blocks from where we lived, i loved hearing that train whistle at night and now we also live near a train track and i hear them all the time, it's just something about trains sorry to babble on.
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April 8, 2011 at 12:09 AM
hahaha. How cute, Iolanda. Just had to come here and thank you for commenting to my blog and for your sweet words. I think you did a really good burlesque here!
Brown Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 6:30 AM
Loved it Iolanda. The best to you in the contest and always. Looks like a winner to me. Love, Carol
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