No Love Lost

Ah! but where is there to run to my love?
When our moon comes crashing down 
What edifice will shelter us?
Or find a citadel indestructible 
We feel apart at the seams 
And what happened, happened 
Beyond our worst dreams 
So come swim in the rising tides 
And sing our final goodbyes 
Here comes the moon 
This time to darken
Not to light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Hello Rizwan, nice to meet you. I see your poem as a sad love lost. I sense pain in this poem.Have a nice day. my friend.
Saleem  Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Like wise Darlene, u sense well. Thank you for reading
Blanca Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 11:43 AM
Rizwan, excellent use of words in your write.
Saleem  Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Thank you so much for reading Carlos
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