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No Longer Unknown

Uninspired Undesired Unadmired Unstable, unable, unemployed Unbelieved, unbelieving Unachieved, unachieving All this - Undisputed But was he Unhappy? Now that he's no longer Unknown?

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Jay Moore

Date: 10/30/2018 8:55:00 AM

Unachievable, No you nailed it.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/30/2018 10:29:00 PM

Ah! And you applied the final blow! ~ gw

Lyric Man

Date: 10/29/2018 4:19:00 PM

Whoa.. talented piece, much enjoyed!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2018 8:33:00 PM

Thank you for your generous evaluation, Lyric Man. Best wishes, Gershon

Chris Green

Date: 10/29/2018 9:14:00 AM

Understood. : ) This was really cool my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2018 1:11:00 PM

Glad you got it... I'm not sure if I get it or not ... Seriously now, appreciate your visit, as always, Chris. :) gw

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/29/2018 7:46:00 AM

The great unknown...now known within your verse...excellent rendering my friend...love & light...^WW^

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2018 1:11:00 PM

Can I hire you for a publicist? You have given this little write quite a stirring into! Thanks a million! ~ gw

Jagdish Pal

Date: 10/29/2018 2:23:00 AM

A remarkable use of alliteration!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2018 1:10:00 PM

Why, thank you, Jagdish!! ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/28/2018 10:33:00 PM

Unstoppable, that's what you are, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2018 1:10:00 PM

I gotta hire you for my lawyer...That way I can beat those tickets I get from those cops who keep stopping me for... :) gw