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No Longer Unknown

Uninspired Undesired Unadmired Unstable, unable, unemployed Unbelieved, unbelieving Unachieved, unachieving All this - Undisputed But was he Unhappy? Now that he's no longer Unknown?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/30/2018 8:55:00 AM
Unachievable, No you nailed it.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/30/2018 10:29:00 PM
Ah! And you applied the final blow! ~ gw
Date: 10/29/2018 4:19:00 PM
Whoa.. talented piece, much enjoyed!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2018 8:33:00 PM
Thank you for your generous evaluation, Lyric Man. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/29/2018 9:14:00 AM
Understood. : ) This was really cool my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2018 1:11:00 PM
Glad you got it... I'm not sure if I get it or not ... Seriously now, appreciate your visit, as always, Chris. :) gw
Date: 10/29/2018 7:46:00 AM
The great unknown...now known within your verse...excellent rendering my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2018 1:11:00 PM
Can I hire you for a publicist? You have given this little write quite a stirring into! Thanks a million! ~ gw
Date: 10/29/2018 2:23:00 AM
A remarkable use of alliteration!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2018 1:10:00 PM
Why, thank you, Jagdish!! ~ Gershon
Date: 10/28/2018 10:33:00 PM
Unstoppable, that's what you are, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2018 1:10:00 PM
I gotta hire you for my lawyer...That way I can beat those tickets I get from those cops who keep stopping me for... :) gw