Gershon Wolf Poet Alliteration

No Longer Unknown

Uninspired
          Undesired
           Unadmired
Unstable, unable, unemployed
   Unbelieved, unbelieving
   Unachieved, unachieving
     All this - Undisputed
     But was he Unhappy?
   Now that he's no longer
          Unknown?

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Jay Moore October 30, 2018 at 8:55 AM Unachievable, No you nailed it. Gershon Wolf October 30, 2018 at 10:29 PM Ah! And you applied the final blow! ~ gw

Lyric Man October 29, 2018 at 4:19 PM Whoa.. talented piece, much enjoyed!! Gershon Wolf October 29, 2018 at 8:33 PM Thank you for your generous evaluation, Lyric Man. Best wishes, Gershon

Chris Green October 29, 2018 at 9:14 AM Understood. : ) This was really cool my friend. Gershon Wolf October 29, 2018 at 1:11 PM Glad you got it... I'm not sure if I get it or not ... Seriously now, appreciate your visit, as always, Chris. :) gw

Winged Warrior October 29, 2018 at 7:46 AM The great unknown...now known within your verse...excellent rendering my friend...love & light...^WW^ Gershon Wolf October 29, 2018 at 1:11 PM Can I hire you for a publicist? You have given this little write quite a stirring into! Thanks a million! ~ gw

Jagdish Pal October 29, 2018 at 2:23 AM A remarkable use of alliteration! Gershon Wolf October 29, 2018 at 1:10 PM Why, thank you, Jagdish!! ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier October 28, 2018 at 10:33 PM Unstoppable, that's what you are, Gershon. Gershon Wolf October 29, 2018 at 1:10 PM I gotta hire you for my lawyer...That way I can beat those tickets I get from those cops who keep stopping me for... :) gw