No Longer Care

If my jar of tears is full, Does that mean I won’t cry anymore? If I’m already broken in a million pieces, Does that mean I can no longer break? If I stick the knife far enough in, Will I become numb to the pain? If I bleed until I bleed out, Does that mean they can no longer hurt me? If my ears become deaf to their words, Will I never again have them scar me? If my skin continues to grow thicker, Will one day I no longer care? And if I no longer care, Does that mean I’ll survive?

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/30/2011 3:59:00 AM

U will survive...ONLY if you keep writing! You still writing Right!?!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/30/2011 4:29:00 AM

Congratulations A for your win in the contest of Brian Strand "Up To Thee". Love, Carol P. S. I was away and missed congrats on many of Brian's contest. I try but don't know if I will ever catch up.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2011 1:34:00 PM

wow, here is one I may never have seen if it had not been entered into this contest. I really like this. A fave for this one. And Congratulations on your fine win.

A Rambling Righting Riley - Shauna Riley
Date: 6/10/2011 1:38:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea...ya it's an older one...I wrote last year...but I RARELY write short poems...so it wasn't hard to choose from haha....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/10/2011 5:58:00 AM

Congrats on your beautiful win in Brian's contest .. a lovely piece of poetry ...

Sidney Beck

Date: 12/25/2010 12:09:00 AM

wow another great poem.....well done indeed