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No Joy To Be Shared By Us

Wasn't love our big dream... when we held hands with closed eyes? Wasn't tomorrow far behind? Years went by as hours, deep feelings changed like seasons; getting closer wasn't easy. Another cold night without feeling the heartbeat; tears dripping on pillowcases. When sunrise arrives, so alone and incomplete... no joy to be shared by us. Entered in Rick Parise's contest, " Ancient Song "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/8/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your win today in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/8/2011 4:09:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew I like this x
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Date: 12/7/2011 5:59:00 PM
Andrew, nice job my friend, Congrats. on a worthy poem presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/7/2011 5:28:00 PM
sad..so sad yet I am sure all of us are here some more than others and more often..I have missed your wonderful writing. Congrad's Light & Love
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