No, I Wont Go

Mother and Father, 
there is nothing wrong with me, 
if there is i dont need help,
the slits in my wrists, my legs, all over my body
that was my choose

Mommy, Daddy,
nothing is wrong,
i hurt inside when you drag me to people who think they know me
they dont know me
nor do you
i know myself,
i know all my actions


its a free country Mom and Dad
its my body,
my mind
and my life
stay out of it
i dont need you
i dont want you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/12/2008 1:26:00 PM
I can relate to this. Sad I know but great write *Brena*
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Date: 12/10/2008 11:27:00 AM
You hurt so bad you can see no relief, so you push people away, content to be by yourself... but it's a false contentment, and this you will realize, given time. God bless Sammy... Keith
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Date: 12/3/2008 11:19:00 AM
aww this is so painful but a good write, maybe the people who don't know you and they do not understand how you fel but there is one person who does, and it is God, he knows us all , he created us and knows our every single thought and our every single feeling, if you can not trust people then please trust God he will wipe every single tear from your eye and he can heal the deepest of wounds caused by people hurting us, he healed me, anyway God bless, and to God you are very precious love diane
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Date: 11/17/2008 3:24:00 PM
SAM?!
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Date: 11/13/2008 8:56:00 PM
baby I feel your pain in this peace you know your mom and dad don't know you and niether do the people they take you too but the only reason they take you there is cause they love you and don't want to see you hurt yourself and you are so right it is a free country but it is your mom ans dads duty to care about you and love you please just stop and think for a bit if they didn't love you they would just ignore you keep writing you are very good and give your parents a chance they do care hon
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Date: 11/4/2008 3:08:00 PM
alright, ill talk to her again. and if you want to, we can be friends. all up to you.
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Date: 11/2/2008 1:33:00 PM
Thank You weirdo. . . You know I love you like my sister right?
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Date: 11/2/2008 1:12:00 PM
What?
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Date: 11/2/2008 1:08:00 PM
OH YEAH! And read my poem GoodBye! And then tell me what you think about it, Okay?
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Date: 11/2/2008 1:06:00 PM
Sam, you should totally write some more new poems cause when you express yourself and you'll stop cutting FOR GOOD! ! ! I love you that is why I'm suggesting this to you. . .
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Date: 10/29/2008 4:53:00 PM
No wait I'll call him right now then call you and you guys can talk how about that?
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Date: 10/29/2008 4:49:00 PM
He won't yell at you and just try. . .
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Date: 10/29/2008 4:46:00 PM
Tell him how I feel and how You feel about the situation. . . Then ask him how he feels about it. . .
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Date: 10/29/2008 4:42:00 PM
David On your house phone or something?
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Date: 10/29/2008 4:28:00 PM
Yes Please Help Me. . . I'm really cornfused right now I don't know if I want you, David or Phillip I'm just really cornfused. . . Love is treating me like right now, Cause I have to chose someone RIGHT NOW!!! Or I might go insane and kill myself either that or hurt myself. . . Please help me out?!
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Date: 10/29/2008 4:16:00 PM
No don't I'm forcing you. . . You love someone else go be with them I'm gonna try to win david back. . .
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Date: 10/29/2008 4:06:00 PM
Yeah I kno but it's really you I want/need. . .
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Date: 10/29/2008 4:03:00 PM
Would you consider going back out with me if I promise to be there for you and loyal?
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Date: 10/29/2008 2:08:00 PM
You still online?
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Date: 10/22/2008 4:34:00 PM
Hey you still online?
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Date: 10/22/2008 4:16:00 PM
I'm new to this site...your poem is heart breaking. Beautifully written. Hope your ok. BG
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Date: 10/14/2008 11:02:00 AM
Hey wanna come over and hang out??
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Date: 10/14/2008 9:22:00 AM
Hey when you get this call me at the 494 number okay. . .
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Date: 10/13/2008 1:45:00 PM
PLEASE SAM, will you go back out wit me I will be loyal and love you till the end this time I promise you that. . . Just please go back out wit me??. . .
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Date: 10/13/2008 10:22:00 AM
Ummmmm. . . Yes. . . And what are you doin today??
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