No " I " In Dna

tis' true mere mortals
toil in turmoil
since grand is the plan
laid seasons ago
for as you can see,
presented to thee
my art is five centuries old!
*inspired by Charles Bukowski
and I quote...."we are hardly ever as strong as that which we create"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
July 13, 2009 at 1:09 PM
James, I am assuming, by your chosen title " No I In DNA " that as a human being, we are not the cause of, but the effect of the power of God or love's DNA. If so brilliant! A Godly bless from Moses!
Chircop Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 8:31 AM
interesting no i in d n i--well penned--charma
Perez Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 6:03 AM
Well, I do like this, and Bukowski is one of the heroes of my longtime teach & mentor from Atlanta days. Find him online: Walter Griffin. Thanks again for reading me & posting loving comments. Nola
Strand Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 1:13 AM
So true Jim nice one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Adeite Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 11:31 PM
Great! Interesting captiön. Göod to go back to the root, to the ancient landmark of the studious sages. I love this. Please keep the flag flying, keep writing...sharing your thoughts with us. Thanks for making your marks here. Best wishes with your writings. Great you James! Adeleke
Kendrick Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 3:14 PM
Like your Lyric. Sara
Peranteau Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 2:06 PM
James,...the art may indeed be five centuries old, yet you here have in your poetic verse kept it alive and well,...Beautiful poem my poetic friend !!!! james
Meadows Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 1:30 PM
this is pretty good
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