Phil Capitano Poet Rhyme

No Greater Beauty

NO GREATER BEAUTY

No greater beauty hath these eyes seen,
No grander vista nor ocean scene,
No better metaphor could Rumi find,
Nor Browning a more perfect rhyme…
No sweeter music hath graced these ears
No absolute truth could be as clear
Than the golden soul light I did view
In your eyes when you said “I see you”.

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John Hamilton July 17, 2017 at 8:59 AM Hey Phil, well done, this is a great rhyme loved the Rumi line, true beauty, congrats on a nice win! Phil Capitano July 19, 2017 at 7:25 AM Thanks John. :)

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2017 at 6:07 PM This is gem, Phil. The message of it is so delightful! Congrats on your win. Phil Capitano July 19, 2017 at 7:26 AM Thanks for commenting Andrea.

Kim Rodrigues July 16, 2017 at 6:07 PM Ahh! A beauty! Congrats, Phil! Phil Capitano July 16, 2017 at 8:54 PM Thanks Kim :)

Eve Roper July 16, 2017 at 5:45 PM Phil, is this for a little girl or a woman? No matter it is still nice,congratulations on your win ~* Phil Capitano July 16, 2017 at 8:55 PM An angel of a woman, thanks.

Alexis Y. December 15, 2016 at 8:34 PM Hi Phil, You've penned a well written piece. Good last line. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Janice Canerdy December 15, 2016 at 7:39 PM I REALLY like this one! Congrats on your win, Phil! Janice

Kim Rodrigues December 15, 2016 at 7:00 AM We all want to be seen, more than anything! Congrats, Phil!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2016 at 1:48 PM - A small beautiful poem, Phil :) - I wish you a blessed weekend - hugs // Sun :)

Gary Bateman May 27, 2016 at 1:52 PM Phil, I like this one. What a beautiful and meaningful rhyme. This is a radiant theme for sure. A "BIG SEVEN" from me!! Cheers and Best, Gary