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No Greater Beauty

NO GREATER BEAUTY No greater beauty hath these eyes seen, No grander vista nor ocean scene, No better metaphor could Rumi find, Nor Browning a more perfect rhyme… No sweeter music hath graced these ears No absolute truth could be as clear Than the golden soul light I did view In your eyes when you said “I see you”.

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Date: 7/17/2017 8:59:00 AM
Hey Phil, well done, this is a great rhyme loved the Rumi line, true beauty, congrats on a nice win!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 7/19/2017 7:25:00 AM
Thanks John. :)
Date: 7/16/2017 6:07:00 PM
Ahh! A beauty! Congrats, Phil!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 7/16/2017 8:54:00 PM
Thanks Kim :)
Date: 7/16/2017 6:07:00 PM
This is gem, Phil. The message of it is so delightful! Congrats on your win.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 7/19/2017 7:26:00 AM
Thanks for commenting Andrea.
Date: 7/16/2017 5:45:00 PM
Phil, is this for a little girl or a woman? No matter it is still nice,congratulations on your win ~*
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Phil Capitano
Date: 7/16/2017 8:55:00 PM
An angel of a woman, thanks.
Date: 12/15/2016 8:34:00 PM
Hi Phil, You've penned a well written piece. Good last line. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 12/15/2016 7:39:00 PM
I REALLY like this one! Congrats on your win, Phil! Janice
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Date: 12/15/2016 7:00:00 AM
We all want to be seen, more than anything! Congrats, Phil!
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Date: 5/28/2016 1:48:00 PM
- A small beautiful poem, Phil :) - I wish you a blessed weekend - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 5/27/2016 1:52:00 PM
Phil, I like this one. What a beautiful and meaningful rhyme. This is a radiant theme for sure. A "BIG SEVEN" from me!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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