Jeff Connelly Poet I do not know?

No Gpa

the egg in the frying pan 
sizzled but mine wasn't 
sunny side up

my brain assimilated
everything but this
wasn't a simulation

i hit a wall 
going at least
sixty miles an hour

looks like i'm not
going to graduate
from Mental State

just 
another
crash dummy

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Richard Lamoureux March 9, 2020 at 9:09 AM I feel this way sometimes.

Alkas Poetry March 9, 2020 at 5:32 AM SURREAL FEEL LIKE THIS, REAL TO HAPPEN, NOT UNUSUAL HOWEVER WHEN CREATION ALLOWS US EVERYTHING TO LIVE AND FEEL DO NOR WORRY JUST ADJUST THE MEDS... SALUTE ALKAS

David Mchattie March 8, 2020 at 4:08 PM You're just like me. Just another crash dummy on the road of life. Have a great day my friend. Jeff Connelly March 8, 2020 at 9:11 PM Thanks David, but you're no dummy.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 8, 2020 at 8:15 AM Potent penning my friend. Rereading, I think this might be my favourite of yours. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 8, 2020 at 11:52 AM Eef. One of my biggest fears. Hopeful hugs, x Jeff Connelly March 8, 2020 at 11:33 AM Thank you Maureen. At this moment it is the truest poem of mine. Having a bite of medication problems.