Sharon Ruebel Poet Tanka

No Goodbye

All the people gone

        not wanting to say goodbye

            next to you i sit

                frozen unable to weep

                    the earth falls from my small hand...

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John Loving Iii April 26, 2013 at 8:42 PM Good to see you are still around and still writing .

Michael Ainsley April 4, 2013 at 1:18 AM Passion and power of soul! Well done!

Anne Rutherford March 26, 2013 at 8:38 AM The threnodies of this inspired Tanka totality understood Sharon. Wishing that all is well with you. xxoo Anne

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 16, 2013 at 4:58 AM Oh this is good, gonna read more Shar xx

Deborah Burch March 14, 2013 at 3:01 PM Exactly!! Well done Sharon. Hugs deb Sharon Ruebel March 15, 2013 at 3:24 PM Thank you Deb...Hard times for sure.....Shar