No Goodbye

there is no goodbye
no, till next time
or see you soon
not a sentiment
expressed in any way
which cuts me deep
and wounds my heart
a slight that hurts
like a betrayal
of emotions shared
felt by one
and one alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Christian Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 4:03 AM
aww it's horrible when this happens, they just walk with out a good bye no explination just nothing, I remember this feeling very well the day my mum walked outt he door when i was 11 she just said to dad i am leaving you for someone else and went I saw my dad have a break down over it, it broke him they would of been maried 25 years the enxt anniversary all thoose years just gone in a blink of an eye, it hurts a lot, Got bless you,
Arteaga Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 11:59 PM
the best feeling are felt with another and the worst feelings are shown alone.
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