No Good Deed - - -

When Sherri was a little girl
a baby crow fell out of the tree
and being my little tomboy
she said "Leave this up to me".

So up the tree she climbed
to put little "Elvis" back in his nest.
Mama crow did not appreciate it
and became somewhat of a pest.

When the rest of us walked outside
she just gave us the evil eye
but for Sherri she had other plans,
dive-bombing her from the sky.

Whichever door she left by
that crow was watching for her
and dived and pecked at our little girl.
The ungrateful, miserable cur.

No good deed goes unpunished
is a saying we've all come to know.
Intended perhaps for humans
but it certainly relates to a crow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mcdonald Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 5:50 PM
It does seem that way sometimes eh? What a brave girl though! I wonder how many little Elvis' came along because of her?
Hollingsworth Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 9:46 AM
i like the idea devloped in this poem...
Johnson Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 4:45 PM
A great one Francine. Thanks for the heads up. I may have forgotten to put it in but it is there now. Thanks a lot. Joyce
Burton Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 12:12 AM
Wow, really enjoyed this writng here have to check out some more of your work love the story and lesson. Have a great night. :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 10:18 PM
This was a very interesting story with an unexpected moral, dear. I enjoyed seeing it on my way off here tonight!
Johnson Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 8:20 PM
Yes I can see it happening with our Aussie crows We lived in Acland near the school the magpies swooped on kids and they run and hid but never swooped on us cos Chris was a feeding them great verse babe tells a story Don
Devonshire Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Did this really happen, Francine? I was frightened for Sherri when mama crow launched her attack. Still, I'm glad she had the sensitivity to try and do the right thing. Your last verse gave me a great laugh. If this isn't the truth, I'll eat crow. Love, Carolyn
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May 16, 2011 at 12:02 PM
Nice story you have penned here Francine.Enjoyed....
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