NO GOOD DEED

A bird dropped one on me today....
                                      perhaps his way of saying
                                                                   "thanks" for the bird feeder
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 4:19 PM
laughing....appreciate the attitude of gratitude. seriously, enjoyed this Monoku
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 11:21 AM
Hello John lawless, Maybe that was the way to say thzank you. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Goldsmith Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 10:35 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun Monoku write. Maybe it was to say thanks. Ask him when he comes back. Hahaha!!!  Have a fun day writing away............
Rodgers Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 8:36 AM
Hello John, This one made me smile, the irony of being “thanked” by a bird in such a way is classic. Even our good deeds can come back with unexpected twists, and you captured that perfectly in a single line. Holiday, Blessings, John, Daniel
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