No Feeling and Not Appealing

No Feeling and Not Appealing

I had to hurry up and write
this down before I forgot this.


When I never show any of my feeling;
What I write and say is not appealing;
While rambling,
Was gambling,
On you disturbed hitting head on ceiling.

Jim Horn

What happens if I check off 1st grade in Categories.
Does this mean that I am writing at a first grade level
of inteligence (LOI) and am on the level?

Also Wharton School of Business is not taught at night school.
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Michael Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Nice...and you couldn't be more correct...All the best Jim
Horn Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 2:17 PM
Arturo your poems are thorough even when ridding on a burrow.
Horn Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 2:17 PM
Arturo your poems are thorough even when ridding on a burrow.
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