No Feeling

I tell myself I'm strong
And I taught myself not to feel
But why is it that I'm staying 
up so long
Thinking about things that no 
longer seem real? 

My heart is now a stone 
So I feel with my head.
Now I'm lying here alone 
With nothing but emptiness in 
this bed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/24/2016 8:47:00 PM
esther baleva, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA...
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Date: 7/27/2015 3:53:00 PM
ESTHER, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/22/2012 1:47:00 PM
A sad song and I feel your pain!...ah but there will be another sunrise! Cynthia
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Date: 8/16/2012 11:46:00 AM
pretty nice i know the feeling of emptiness
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Date: 8/15/2012 8:56:00 AM
short and sweet.. I like it..
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Date: 8/12/2012 3:31:00 PM
We all go through it. Thanks for your poem.
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Date: 8/11/2012 12:19:00 PM
well written thoughts!! welcome and happy writing!!
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Date: 8/9/2012 5:54:00 AM
A welcome smile from me to Esther, you write very good - Like your poem a lot. - Hope you will have fun and joy with poetry. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/9/2012 5:51:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Esther. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2012 1:48:00 AM
I love this!! It explains howI feel. Your an amazing poet I hope to read more from you!!
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Date: 8/8/2012 12:13:00 PM
Beautiful...So thoughtfully written...
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Esther Baleva
Date: 8/8/2012 5:36:00 PM
Thanks deepak :)
Date: 8/8/2012 6:36:00 AM
nice write.have a nice day
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