No Fears

Twelve beers
No fears

That's kweer
Can't steer

Bam Crash
Car smashed

In jail
No bail

Feels like
Three strikes

I'm out ~
No doubt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 6:12 AM
Jazzy and fun. Loved every second.
Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 7:30 PM
What happened to that alcoholism in your family?! ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 6:33 AM
A hard luck footle. Done nicely.
Wolf Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 8:22 PM
Thank you, Kim. :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 11:45 PM
Delightful, Gershon. I particularly love your use of "kweer".
Wolf Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 8:21 PM
Haha! Actually I couldn't get the quxxx spelling past the P.S. censors! :) gw
Buehler Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 10:52 PM
I loved reading this great little tale of drunk driving, told with wit and a dash of humor. Blessings. :=)
Wolf Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Aw, thanks for such a lovely comment, Evelyn! I can remember driving about 1/2 this drunk as a teen-ager. Amazing I'm still alive, never had an accident, and never was booked for a DUI. ~ Lucky Louie
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