No Fears

Twelve beers No fears That's kweer Can't steer Bam Crash Car smashed In jail No bail Feels like Three strikes I'm out ~ No doubt

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/12/2020 6:12:00 AM

Jazzy and fun. Loved every second.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/12/2020 7:30:00 PM

What happened to that alcoholism in your family?! ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/11/2020 6:33:00 AM

A hard luck footle. Done nicely.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2020 8:22:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. :) gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/10/2020 11:45:00 PM

Delightful, Gershon. I particularly love your use of "kweer".

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2020 8:21:00 PM

Haha! Actually I couldn't get the quxxx spelling past the P.S. censors! :) gw

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/10/2020 10:52:00 PM

I loved reading this great little tale of drunk driving, told with wit and a dash of humor. Blessings. :=)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2020 8:18:00 PM

Aw, thanks for such a lovely comment, Evelyn! I can remember driving about 1/2 this drunk as a teen-ager. Amazing I'm still alive, never had an accident, and never was booked for a DUI. ~ Lucky Louie