No Escape

Dark rock creatures creep
half-submerged in clouded tide. . . 
no escape from night

For Raul Moreno's Ghost Tide contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:44 PM
I like the no escape theme. deep * Forever ~SKAT~
Poet Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:18 AM
Capturing so much with so few words,wonderful!-kashinath
A   Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 11:26 AM
Wow! you did good on this one. Nice one.
Chachere Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 8:51 PM
a ghost tide is upon you. it wishes to ruin your bones gradually. you should always be catious with a ghost gun, Andrea.lol -Always&Forever Lynette
Guzzi Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 4:51 PM
shiver!!! Light & Love
Knop Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 2:24 PM
All three lines are great, you should be successful in the contest with this! Have a nice week and keep writing....Gert
Bono Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 5:48 PM
Yah got a winner here.nicely written.Hope all is well with you.
Tugaff Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 4:10 AM
Very nice poem in Haiku form. Thanks for sharing it to us. Ernilando
Pickett Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 8:32 AM
You certainly have many "Hot" poems... Well deserved.... Keep up the good work my friend...:JP]
Chu Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 11:41 PM
nice. "no escape from night" i like that line.
Beam Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 7:11 PM
congratulations on win
Fraser Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Many congratulations on your first place in Raul's contest >> James
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 4:50 PM
Wow Andrea, I am so happy this poem won first place. Congratulations! Your imagery is superb! Love, Connie
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February 26, 2010 at 4:43 PM
Perfection, Andrea! Congratulations and kudos! You placed 1st with your entry in Ghost Tides Sponsored by: Raul Moreno. Keep those creative words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann
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February 26, 2010 at 4:22 PM
First Place!! Way to go, Andrea! Somehow I missed this gem earlier, but it's absolutely awesome and well deserving of the recognition. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 12:27 AM
It totally rocks that your haiku won first place--super yay for you, Andrea! Told you your rock creatures were unique :) hope to read more haiku from you!
Hickman Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 7:27 PM
Congratulations I knew you would do so very well in the contest your haiku was more than fantastic,,,,and I indeed want to Thank you for reading my words and leaving such sweet and wonderful comments behind,,,,Blessings..Cecil
Mckenzie Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 1:54 PM
Andrea~ Congratulations on your first place win! Laura :)
Bagnall Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 1:36 PM
Ooh spooky ! - Congratulations on the win I realy like this, I'm glad I'm not the only one seeing monsters in this picture !
James Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 12:08 PM
Very descriptive, so litle words! Very enjoyable
Haick Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 9:59 AM
Hey Andrea, my congratulations on your win in Raul's "Ghost Tides" contest! Thanks for your kind comments! Peace, love, Audrey
Adelana Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 8:47 AM
This is a lovely haiku. Perfect imagery description. Congratualtion on your win
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 3:27 AM
Congratulations Andrea on you first place win. See we never know what we can do until we try. This poem is an outstanding Haiku. I would like to see you write more of them. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 6:06 PM
What a great imagination you had for this one, Andrea! Hooray for 1st place!! :) Well deserved! ~ Love, Carrie
Crisci Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 5:54 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on your first place in Raul's contest. Your Haiku reveals much mystery and suspense. It is magnificently written. May you have many more! Smile!Enjoy your honor, Andrea! Love, peace, hugs and blessings, Andrew.
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