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No Escape

Dark rock creatures creep half-submerged in clouded tide. . . no escape from night For Raul Moreno's Ghost Tide contest

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:44:00 PM

I like the no escape theme. deep * Forever ~SKAT~

Kash Poet

Date: 1/18/2011 8:18:00 AM

Capturing so much with so few words,wonderful!-kashinath

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2010 11:26:00 AM

Wow! you did good on this one. Nice one.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/26/2010 8:51:00 PM

a ghost tide is upon you. it wishes to ruin your bones gradually. you should always be catious with a ghost gun, Andrea.lol -Always&Forever Lynette

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/8/2010 4:51:00 PM

shiver!!! Light & Love

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/8/2010 2:24:00 PM

All three lines are great, you should be successful in the contest with this! Have a nice week and keep writing....Gert

Colleen Bono

Date: 3/4/2010 5:48:00 PM

Yah got a winner here.nicely written.Hope all is well with you.

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/4/2010 4:10:00 AM

Very nice poem in Haiku form. Thanks for sharing it to us. Ernilando

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/3/2010 8:32:00 AM

You certainly have many "Hot" poems... Well deserved.... Keep up the good work my friend...:JP]

Hyle Chu

Date: 3/1/2010 11:41:00 PM

nice. "no escape from night" i like that line.

John Beam

Date: 2/27/2010 7:11:00 PM

congratulations on win

James Fraser

Date: 2/27/2010 8:36:00 AM

Many congratulations on your first place in Raul's contest >> James

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/26/2010 4:50:00 PM

Wow Andrea, I am so happy this poem won first place. Congratulations! Your imagery is superb! Love, Connie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/26/2010 4:43:00 PM

Perfection, Andrea! Congratulations and kudos! You placed 1st with your entry in Ghost Tides Sponsored by: Raul Moreno. Keep those creative words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/26/2010 4:22:00 PM

First Place!! Way to go, Andrea! Somehow I missed this gem earlier, but it's absolutely awesome and well deserving of the recognition. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/26/2010 12:27:00 AM

It totally rocks that your haiku won first place--super yay for you, Andrea! Told you your rock creatures were unique :) hope to read more haiku from you!

Cecil Hickman

Date: 2/25/2010 7:27:00 PM

Congratulations I knew you would do so very well in the contest your haiku was more than fantastic,,,,and I indeed want to Thank you for reading my words and leaving such sweet and wonderful comments behind,,,,Blessings..Cecil

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 2/24/2010 1:54:00 PM

Andrea~ Congratulations on your first place win! Laura :)

Nick Bagnall

Date: 2/24/2010 1:36:00 PM

Ooh spooky ! - Congratulations on the win I realy like this, I'm glad I'm not the only one seeing monsters in this picture !

Gareth James

Date: 2/24/2010 12:08:00 PM

Very descriptive, so litle words! Very enjoyable

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/24/2010 9:59:00 AM

Hey Andrea, my congratulations on your win in Raul's "Ghost Tides" contest! Thanks for your kind comments! Peace, love, Audrey

Olajide Adelana

Date: 2/24/2010 8:47:00 AM

This is a lovely haiku. Perfect imagery description. Congratualtion on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2010 3:27:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea on you first place win. See we never know what we can do until we try. This poem is an outstanding Haiku. I would like to see you write more of them. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/23/2010 6:06:00 PM

What a great imagination you had for this one, Andrea! Hooray for 1st place!! :) Well deserved! ~ Love, Carrie

Andrew Crisci

Date: 2/23/2010 5:54:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea on your first place in Raul's contest. Your Haiku reveals much mystery and suspense. It is magnificently written. May you have many more! Smile!Enjoy your honor, Andrea! Love, peace, hugs and blessings, Andrew.