No Control

Peter has 150 candy bars, he eats 125, what does he have now Diabetes... thought it would be kinda obvious he'd be endowed Should have known better And followed doc's orders to the letter Instead of going off the rails and gorging himself like a cow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Michael Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 6:00 AM
Nice one... Good message too... All the best Jack
Ellison Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 6:02 AM
Diabetes seems rampant these days!!! Cheers!
Cunningham Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 1:07 PM
Too much sugar rots your teeth and other things, an apple a day is better.
Ellison Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Yes, it keeps the doctor away as they say!!! LOL
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Lol! ;D Good morning my sweet funny friend! xomo <3
Ellison Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Life is a bowl of calories!!! LOL Good morning my love... hugs, Happy Jack XOX
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