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Peter has 150 candy bars, he eats 125, what does he have now Diabetes... thought it would be kinda obvious he'd be endowed Should have known better And followed doc's orders to the letter Instead of going off the rails and gorging himself like a cow

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Date: 7/30/2018 6:00:00 AM
Nice one... Good message too... All the best Jack
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/30/2018 6:02:00 AM
Diabetes seems rampant these days!!! Cheers!
Date: 7/29/2018 1:07:00 PM
Too much sugar rots your teeth and other things, an apple a day is better.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/29/2018 1:54:00 PM
Yes, it keeps the doctor away as they say!!! LOL
Date: 7/29/2018 7:48:00 AM
Lol! ;D Good morning my sweet funny friend! xomo <3
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/29/2018 7:53:00 AM
Life is a bowl of calories!!! LOL Good morning my love... hugs, Happy Jack XOX

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