No Consciousness Behind Their Faces

>>1111>>NO CONSCIOUSNESS BEHIND THEIR FACES<<1111<<

Dam straight dam straight, 
These ill lines are great,
Best be evacuating your current mindset, 
Let yourself breath away from your television set,
You unconsciously imitate,
Looking for my soul mate, 
Exploring in all places before it's too late,
Hear the voice within my words, open the gate,
Can you see me? Can you hear me?
Taking spiritual form covering all the oceans seas,
I know you don't believe me, 
I don't even believe myself,
These words are stealthy, straight to my paper, 
As they escape my hidden chambers,
What about the danger, am I cursed within this society I live,
At the same time my minds an information siv,
Processing knowledge into my narratives,
I've got bars up in this poetry heaven,
Never leaving, always believing 
Because I'm receiving mad skills while I'm breathing,
Ignoring the heathen doomed because they don't bloom,
Zooming, at subatomic speeds, 
Feeding, neurons, but could fall like Megatron,
Transformers in disguise, defeating the Decepticons,
Hear what I say, I'm the rays, that make you grow,
Flowing illmatic, attack with my eternal static,
Swag, turbo at high boost with no lag,
Claim my position, on this mission I put up my flag,
Fantastic rad flow I lay down, 
Top off the ladder within this realm,
I dissect your idea's with my ancient intellect,
Detecting your folly, your on a foolish streak,
Found when I sit around and listen to people speak,
Was seeking in the wrong places,
Finding no consciousness behind their faces,
Causing me to trip up, double knot my laces,
Never keeping to the basics,
Can't even fake this, it makes me sick,
Instead I assist, I try and I try,
Percentage always high,
Will live a long life before I die,
Knowledge of self keeps me rich,
Never flinch at anyone dropping bombs,
My poetry may seem long, 
But it belongs here, right here and now,
Devouring into the ground like a balanced tower,
Planting the first seed and im goin to watch it flower

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/21/2015 1:12:00 PM
WOW, your poems are so powerful. I like the way you allow it to flow, no matter how long each one is. How can you say it is hard to believe, yet here you are, and here I am. ((anyways, do not listen to me, I'm just here reading and enjoying)) Love LINDA
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Date: 11/21/2015 8:04:00 PM
I'm listening, I'm Listening :) Thanks again Linda. I've even questioned this too? As soon as I wrote "I don't even believe myself", I questioned it, but this is a freestyle writing, so I don't let myself change anything I put onto paper. Maybe the answer is I feel that everything could be an illusion? My mind is always curious, wandering around observing. Glad you are here. Aroha, Quincy Mac
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