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sea anemone
produces own eggs
and sperm
needs a good kisser
[*Sea anemones breed by liberating sperm and eggs through their mouths into the sea.] THIRD PLACE WINNER March 18, 2021 For Constance La Frances “Haiku” Contest

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Date: 3/26/2021 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative pen you write with. "Good Write" Have a blessed day/weekend...........
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Date: 3/26/2021 8:49:00 PM
Paula, I wonder how many readers came to this poem via the title. Then, I wonder how many of them expected something entirely different? Will never know, but I can't believe the number of people who have read and comment on it. Interesting.....
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Date: 3/26/2021 5:05:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paula. That made my day!
Date: 3/24/2021 3:28:00 PM
Milt, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative With Haiku and you did exactly that, I like this non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/24/2021 4:16:00 PM
Thanks, Constance, very much. I'm glad I slipped in under the wire. Thanks so much too for your patience with this ol' man!
Date: 3/22/2021 10:14:00 PM
I must say, the title is appropriate and this is very unique. Congratulations. The best is always last.
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Date: 3/23/2021 8:37:00 AM
Ah Janis, thanks so much for your kind comment and your ongoing support. You are so special!
Date: 3/22/2021 7:08:00 PM
love the imagery and the dose of humour too and it is such an informative poem too!:-) many congrats on your win Milton:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2021 8:18:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your read and your congrats!
Date: 3/22/2021 4:49:00 PM
Milton, Congrats on your win with your creative haiku! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/22/2021 6:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. I managed to slip in under the wire. Your compliment is really appreciated.
Date: 3/22/2021 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations, L Milton, on your Haiku win; best wishes, Las
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Date: 3/22/2021 6:09:00 PM
Thanks, Lasaad. Thanks so much.
Date: 3/22/2021 2:27:00 PM
Great to see humor in this one, L! Glad you at least slipped in under the wire! i sure know THAT feeling.
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Date: 3/22/2021 2:34:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I have great difficult with what I call "corrupted forms," and I don't know why. I had to work on this one at the last moment to keep it from being "regular." Anyway, moving right along....he who comes in last at least finishes the race!
Date: 3/22/2021 1:29:00 PM
Back with congratulations ...
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Date: 3/22/2021 1:38:00 PM
Whew! It just slipped in under the wire! Oh, well...I thought it would place higher, but....
Date: 3/22/2021 1:04:00 PM
- Back with a congratulations, Milton :)
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Date: 3/22/2021 1:38:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine. It just slipped under the wire, didn't it?
Date: 3/21/2021 8:53:00 AM
I love this haiku, L. Milton:-) Looks like a sure winner to me!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/21/2021 2:15:00 PM
I am simply amazed at the response this little poem is receiving. I guess it's the title.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/21/2021 9:13:00 AM
Well, I can hope, Edward. I do like it, too. Thanks for your encouragement.
Date: 3/19/2021 4:40:00 PM
It was amazing to find out that sea anemones are aquatic, predatory, and poisonous. Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 3/19/2021 7:16:00 PM
Thanks for the read, Lasaad. I'm glad that it was informative.
Date: 3/19/2021 12:54:00 PM
Hi L. Milton, You've penned a good and informative entry for the contest. Your title is an “ attention” grabber. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good day and weekend:-) Alexis
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/19/2021 3:12:00 PM
Alexis, I'd say it is rather hard to pass once one sees that title. Oh, well, I couldn't figure out how to fit it into the haiku of three lines. So, I made it the title. Thanks for reading!
Date: 3/19/2021 11:39:00 AM
But some of them still see red! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 3/19/2021 12:07:00 PM
Aloha! Rico. If you say so. I've never seen an angry anemone. lol.
Date: 3/19/2021 4:03:00 AM
Pretty lonely coupling I suppose. Many wishes, Kai
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/19/2021 8:58:00 AM
I would think so. I learned so much about sea anemones in preparing for this little seventeen syllable haiku. I had half a page of five and seven syllable lines, but was restricted to a mere three. Anyway, it was educational.
Date: 3/19/2021 1:46:00 AM
- through their mouths ... we always learn something new :) - Well done, Milton :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/19/2021 9:00:00 AM
Yep, it appears that's how the sea anemone propagates itself, apparently not needing any help. I am guessing, then, that the creature is both male and female. And, my, what problem we have understanding humans with sexual anomalies. Interesting, isn't it?
Date: 3/19/2021 1:29:00 AM
Well I never knew that, wonder if man will ever go that way, we'd save a fortune not having to woo women lol Good luck in the contest Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/19/2021 9:00:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Learn something every day. lol.
Date: 3/18/2021 8:16:00 PM
Ah, so much fun; unusual for a haiku to be fun!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/18/2021 8:35:00 PM
LOL. It was a fun write...if quite different from most of my stuff! Thanks for the compliment.
Date: 3/18/2021 4:16:00 PM
A smart one, nature knows it best Milt. gl in the contest
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Date: 3/18/2021 7:04:00 PM
Thanks, Mystic. I wasn't sure this would go by the censor, but apparently it did. I learned a lot about the sea anemone and thought it would be a good entry. Thanks for the GL wishes!
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