No Complaining Allowed

The prime reason we're given this great life we're livin' Is not to complain bout stuff... that can't be forgiven Be blessed we live here Without daily fear That some wacko will bomb us and to obscurity be driven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sivey Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 4:56 PM
I hope there isn't a bomb flying by us soon by the crazy wacko in North Korea! I just loved your awesome poem this afternoon! You have delighted me yet again with your clever limerick style, it may take me awhile, but I wake with a smile, that lasts a long mile! Great Work my friend!!
Ellison Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 5:01 PM
SCARY EH!! Hope cooler heads prevail!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 11:22 AM
amen do
Ellison Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 11:33 AM
We is blessed us Canuckys!!! lol
Flats Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:36 AM
I began to complain about the rain//but then Jack's words dazzled my brain//I said to myself, "Ed//it could be worse, you could be dead."//Then I remembered, Ed's not my name. GOOD MORNING SIR JACK!!!
Ellison Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Big chuckle here... you've been on fire lately my good buddy!!! GOOD MORNING SIR JOHN JOHN!!!
Cresswell Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Just live it while you got it Jack. Time is never so precious as when it could be snatched or in this case blown away.
Cresswell Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Yep!
Ellison Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:00 AM
WOWSERS! Dear Patricia, you is up with the birdies today!!! Happy to read your words today... keep on keepin' on... love, Jake xxx
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