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Faintly falling in failing flight-
En route to crash in Death's Delight!
(To be blown apart, 'tis a better start)
Than to travel back and make things right
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 8:50 AM
Chan my friend A few lines but very poignant and meaningful. You made this thought provoking and deep. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Christmas Tale poem. Alvin and The Chipmunks is a classic. Hugs and Love
That Archaic Poet Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 9:18 AM
Isn't it though, lol? Thanks, Sweet Pea <3
Anglesey Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 10:59 AM
Would be much easier to implode than make up for past transgressions. Superb ~
That Archaic Poet Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 4:53 AM
Thanks, K <3 <3 <3
Mcdaid Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 1:12 PM
beautifully put
That Archaic Poet Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 2:07 PM
Thanks, Liam :)
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