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No Agenda Today

No agenda today, slip outside~ play
What did eyes spy, moon filling in day's sky
Fluffy clouds float around, for fun I stay
God's creation touches my soul, so I 
Offer up inadequate praise, stand by
Flooded with feelings of love from above
The soft gentle cooing of the sweet Young Dove
My attention shifts to fall's light beauty
My spirit fills again, I fall in love
With creation's beauty~ Christian duty  

Contest: Agendaless Exuberance 
Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker
Date posted: 11-16-2021
I used syllablecounter.net to count the syllables.
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Calasibetta Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Hi Sara, a lovely write, filled with the beauty that the autumn brings ~ Blessings, Paulette
Kendrick Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Your presence at my page is delightful. Your comment encouraging. Sara
Horne Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:46 AM
lovely joyful write, my friend
Kendrick Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:36 AM
Thank you, Jack for the nice review. Sara
Baker Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 11:40 AM
Great entry Sara, A nice smooth read about a day lived moment by moment, God's way. A poet friend, Bill
Kendrick Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Bill, 'Tis nice to have a day like that from time to time. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara
Ball Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 7:45 AM
Love this Sara. You describe a simple unhurried, un-harassed day just enjoying the things around you. Wonderful. God Bless and stay well, Good luck in the contest. JB
Kendrick Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Judy, Thank you for the well wishes for our health. I know as we begin to get inside more in groups that the spread of the virus could get worse again so we all need well wishes as far as health. Sara
Skelly Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 3:09 AM
How wonderful to soak up all that is beautiful in our world, and fill the soul with delight..nicely done Sara...Delice
Kendrick Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Yes it is. I hope I can do some of that today. Delice, thank you for your visit. Sara
Horsman Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 11:08 PM
Such an uplifting poem, Sara, love it.
Kendrick Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 4:40 AM
Why, thank you, Harry. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 10:59 PM
Wish I could do away with agendas and concentrate more on my Creator.
Kendrick Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 4:36 AM
Victor, I find that there are minutes or even seconds here and there all during the day. When I used to have to drive to do my job, I would enjoy something going on in the sky or a field of peach trees in spring or fall or seeing birds soaring. I have so many pictures in my head of beautiful scenes that was designed for me by God to enjoy on that day in that moment in time. Thanks for your visit. Take time to enjoy life and your Creator. Sara
Wolf Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 7:38 PM
Lovely penning! ... I admit to a little jealousy ... Can't remember the last day I spent with 'no agenda.' ... O.K. I'm thinking hard now... And I can remember! Yippee. It was in 2011, our family's last vacation to the Wisconsin Dells. Gosh, that's ten years already... Time to do it again (and again). Retired now -- and never been so busy in my life lol! :) gw
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 6:55 PM
All good suggestions... Thank you, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 4:28 AM
Gershon, You need to take mini-vacations or a big one at least yearly. I know this has been 2 years of stay at home but there has got to be something that you can do in your area that is restful, beautiful, and not so crowded or just where you can park your car and look at nature. Sometimes our own backyards with a birdfeeder, hummingbird feeder and you can fix an area to draw butterflies can be a place to just mellow out. Thank you for your visit. Sara
Poet Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 1:20 PM
Sara, you've written a beautiful piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest because you have written a very insightful poem with a wonderful metaphor.
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 1:31 PM
Lasaad, I am honored that you think this is beautiful. I appreciate your presence at my page. Sara
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November 16, 2021 at 11:20 AM
What a beautiful Psalm of praise in David's tradition Sara. I am sure this write brought a huge smile to God's face written from your faithful heart. Best wishes for the contest! Sending you all the blessings of the season.
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 1:27 PM
Sam, I hope that God was pleased with my penning this one. It has not been easy to write for awhile now since having COVID. I hope that it gets better again. Thanks for your visit for it was just what I needed today. Sara
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