Nirbhaya's Agony

A 23 year old girl who was very happily living in this world,
from Bihar this girl came to Delhi to become A DOCTOR.
Her pretty face appearance was shown for the last time to her parents,
as her dreams had all split as the turning point in this girl's life was quite absurd.
it was not at all an understandable situation as NIRBHAYA on the night of 16 December 
was in a white bus where,for 2 hours she was brutally beaten up.
The six people behaved in such a vulgar way,as the girl had asked them for there
body parts to donate.
This incident was a shocking one,as nothing like this had happened in the past.
Rallies were held for her,people were crying,as she was fighting for her life,
but her will power was so strong,that she told her parents 
that she was going to come back to see the 6 demons die on the spot.
Unfortunately this did not happen as her last breath she took was on 29 December.
But her parents continued to fight for her,and at last NIRBHAYA got her justice in the
second week of September the 4 were ordered to be hanged.
Among them there was a teenager who was jailed by the commissioners,
one of them hanged himself as his guilt had irritated him for the behavior he had done.
After that the whole world rejoiced on the victory of this brave girl,who was no more
but only in the candle lights of the people.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/18/2013 12:57:00 PM
A heartrending narrative, yes i heard dis news frm my motherland india, shameful things hapen! U wrote a hardhitting narrative, well done poetess! And thanx for yor coment on mine too.
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Date: 11/17/2013 8:59:00 AM
- A terrible story - think I've read such stories before ... is this a real story ? - whether this is true or not .... it happens in real life .... in our crazy world! - Very well written Mahima !!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/15/2013 12:42:00 PM
Hi, In this layout you completely have achieved your aim putting out this message. the narrative power appealing to the senses giving that remorse for your heroine. nice one. >>>HENSHAW<<<
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Date: 11/15/2013 4:07:00 AM
Oh yes , Mahima ..... I had seen the headlines about this beautiful and charming girl .... May god bless her soul . A wonderful write on the victim ...<3 Saanvi : )
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Date: 11/14/2013 11:34:00 AM
Mahima, thank you for the HI. Of course I will support your poetry and never judge you in a lesser manner. I admire that you are young and love writing. As a matter of fact when I first joined the soup, I had many teens who followed my work, and looked me constantly.. Many are gone now, but always come back and say hello. I was proud to see them posting, not giving up. I started writing poems when I was 12. and here I am enjoying what others have to offer. You impressed me big with this one. you got my emotions going..... hugs and love...LINDA
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Date: 11/14/2013 11:21:00 AM
what a tragic poem...is this based on true events? so scary and sad....this one really touches the reader....welcome to poetry soup ...hugs
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Date: 11/13/2013 10:39:00 AM
Mahima, this is tragic...it gave me goosebumps. like the folks...I am glad the girls parent, never gave up... glad justice was served...I'd never want to imagine such a horrible ordeal happening to my girls, or any other... oh my.. you have startled me... gees. ..thank you for sharing the story....luv...Linda
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