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Nippy Autumn Night

. our lab is snoring in front of the fire a wet log sizzles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/16/2018 8:50:00 PM
lovely peaceful imagery, Carrie.
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Date: 10/10/2010 12:08:00 PM
like it my friend thank you [duncan]
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Date: 10/9/2010 10:53:00 PM
adorable, congrats on your win in the contest Carrie
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest with this cute poem >> James
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Date: 10/9/2010 12:28:00 AM
This is different, yet profound in as much, one can feel the poem, congrats on this wonderful Haiku
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Date: 10/8/2010 1:22:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your big win in Andrea's contest with this awesome write and win.. enjoy another sweet and happy victorious moment with luv..
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Date: 10/8/2010 1:11:00 PM
Such a great mood-setting haiku, Carrie. Congrats on your win~ Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/8/2010 12:07:00 PM
Carrie super imagery and congratulations on your win ;)
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Date: 10/8/2010 11:25:00 AM
what another comfy haiku, Carrie :) -- enjoyed reading this & imagining that log sizzling (I had to re-read this though-- apparently my mindset is weird-- I actually was thinking of "lab" as in laboratory haha I need SLEEP) --Super congrats on your win, Carrie --hugs :) nikko :)
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your lonely 4th place. Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:26:00 AM
this was very nice, CArrie. Congrats on your 4th place with me. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:19:00 AM
Many congratulations for this terrific win.
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Date: 10/1/2010 3:48:00 PM
That is a picture of contentment. Thank you for your kind words. Love, Gerard
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Date: 9/28/2010 9:46:00 AM
Loved it Carrie. Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:36:00 PM
Very creative haiku with fine images, Carrie
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Date: 9/27/2010 4:04:00 PM
Such a warm image of contentment and peace, Carrie. I'm really enjoying this "modern" haiku form very much! If this is for Andrea's contest, I'm looking at a winner. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/27/2010 3:53:00 PM
Reads like a comfortable winter eve..Almost like being there..Sara
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Date: 9/27/2010 3:27:00 PM
Carrie, enjoyed,..p.d.
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