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Nippy Autumn Night

.                    our lab is snoring
               
                     in front of the fire

                     a wet log sizzles

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/16/2018 8:50:00 PM

lovely peaceful imagery, Carrie.

Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/10/2010 12:08:00 PM

like it my friend thank you [duncan]

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/9/2010 10:53:00 PM

adorable, congrats on your win in the contest Carrie

James Fraser

Date: 10/9/2010 7:25:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest with this cute poem >> James

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/9/2010 12:28:00 AM

This is different, yet profound in as much, one can feel the poem, congrats on this wonderful Haiku

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/8/2010 1:22:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your big win in Andrea's contest with this awesome write and win.. enjoy another sweet and happy victorious moment with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/8/2010 1:11:00 PM

Such a great mood-setting haiku, Carrie. Congrats on your win~ Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/8/2010 12:07:00 PM

Carrie super imagery and congratulations on your win ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/8/2010 11:25:00 AM

what another comfy haiku, Carrie :) -- enjoyed reading this & imagining that log sizzling (I had to re-read this though-- apparently my mindset is weird-- I actually was thinking of "lab" as in laboratory haha I need SLEEP) --Super congrats on your win, Carrie --hugs :) nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2010 9:26:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/8/2010 7:48:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your lonely 4th place. Smile. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/8/2010 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Carrie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2010 4:26:00 AM

this was very nice, CArrie. Congrats on your 4th place with me. LUv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/8/2010 3:19:00 AM

Many congratulations for this terrific win.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 10/1/2010 3:48:00 PM

That is a picture of contentment. Thank you for your kind words. Love, Gerard

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/28/2010 9:46:00 AM

Loved it Carrie. Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/27/2010 5:36:00 PM

Very creative haiku with fine images, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/27/2010 4:04:00 PM

Such a warm image of contentment and peace, Carrie. I'm really enjoying this "modern" haiku form very much! If this is for Andrea's contest, I'm looking at a winner. Love, Carolyn