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Nippy Autumn Night

.                    our lab is snoring
               
                     in front of the fire

                     a wet log sizzles

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Line Gauthier

April 16, 2018 at 8:50 PM

lovely peaceful imagery, Carrie.

Duncan Chappell

October 10, 2010 at 12:08 PM

like it my friend thank you [duncan]

Francine Roberts

October 9, 2010 at 10:53 PM

adorable, congrats on your win in the contest Carrie

James Fraser

October 9, 2010 at 7:25 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest with this cute poem >> James

Harry Horsman

October 9, 2010 at 12:28 AM

This is different, yet profound in as much, one can feel the poem, congrats on this wonderful Haiku

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 8, 2010 at 1:22 PM

Congrats Carrie on your big win in Andrea's contest with this awesome write and win.. enjoy another sweet and happy victorious moment with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

October 8, 2010 at 1:11 PM

Such a great mood-setting haiku, Carrie. Congrats on your win~ Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

October 8, 2010 at 12:07 PM

Carrie super imagery and congratulations on your win ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

October 8, 2010 at 11:25 AM

what another comfy haiku, Carrie :) -- enjoyed reading this & imagining that log sizzling (I had to re-read this though-- apparently my mindset is weird-- I actually was thinking of "lab" as in laboratory haha I need SLEEP) --Super congrats on your win, Carrie --hugs :) nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 8, 2010 at 9:26 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

October 8, 2010 at 7:48 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your lonely 4th place. Smile. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

October 8, 2010 at 5:41 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Carrie

Andrea Dietrich

October 8, 2010 at 4:26 AM

this was very nice, CArrie. Congrats on your 4th place with me. LUv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

October 8, 2010 at 3:19 AM

Many congratulations for this terrific win.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

October 1, 2010 at 3:48 PM

That is a picture of contentment. Thank you for your kind words. Love, Gerard

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 28, 2010 at 9:46 AM

Loved it Carrie. Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 27, 2010 at 5:36 PM

Very creative haiku with fine images, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

September 27, 2010 at 4:04 PM

Such a warm image of contentment and peace, Carrie. I'm really enjoying this "modern" haiku form very much! If this is for Andrea's contest, I'm looking at a winner. Love, Carolyn