Nineseventeen

Aahhh sumptuous beloved nineseventeen

calling for hot frothing, purling, bubbling steam

laving eager flesh with honey scented cream

strategic jets pummelling tight spots unseen

hand languidly reaches champagne flute between

naughty nibbles on silver dishes that gleam

reflecting radiance of goddess light beam

eyes devour tales of sensual jewelled queen

glistening satisfied muscles stretch and preen

breath slows, pleasure coaxes perky nerves to dream.



Written 9th July 2018
for contest 9.17
Also Brian Strand's Late August Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Congratulations on your win. :)
Waters Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 4:57 PM
thanks
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Nice mix of words! Congrats!
Waters Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 4:57 PM
thanks
Canerdy Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Whew! :-) CONGRATS on your win! Janice
Waters Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 12:32 AM
hee hee - thanks
Nance Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 2:05 PM
Steamy and dreamy, what a write!
Waters Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Mmmm
Man Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Virginia.. you deserve to be pampered girl!
Waters Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:28 PM
Mmmm
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:07 AM
sounds like a wonderful pampering session Virginia!:-) hugs Jan xx
Waters Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:27 PM
Mmmm
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