Nine Times Nine Plus Nine Birthday

Nine days and she is counting until
Her age will be nine times nine plus nine
She wears a size nine dress, she reminds
Tells me please do not make such a fuss
Nine times I tell her not to worry
Simply dress yourself up to the nines
And we will celebrate your birthday
With all nine times nine candles plus nine
Everything will surely work out fine!

Written May 10, 2021
for "A Time for Nine" Poetry Contest
sponsored by Michelle Faulkner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Woodrow Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 12:27 PM
such a fun read :)
Canerdy Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:12 AM
This is a really good one, Milton--creatively conceived, skillfully written, and charming! Janice
Hankins Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 7:55 AM
Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment, Janice. I appreciated your positive remarks.
Wolf Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 8:13 PM
Whoa! Seems you have really nailed this one, Milt -- with or without a contest. Love it! :) gw
Hankins Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 9:15 PM
Thanks, Gershon. I'm glad you got a kick out of it!
Mcintosh Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:01 PM
Just adorable... A nice nine poem. Love it. God bless you friend. Love to you, Gina
Hankins Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:01 PM
Thanks, Gina!
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