Russell Sivey Poet Rhyme

Nine Times

A view beneath the oak tree was sure beautiful
She waits for him to come, a heart bountiful
Her eyes viewed only what was lovely and wonderful
A tenderness she held deep within her pure heart
Living with peace, she waits for a new start
Water laps up to the shore near her feet
Making her warm life whole and surely, wondrously complete
Nine times has she ventured down to this lake
Her soul’s his if he would come and take

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Tracie- Indigo Dreamweaver's "9" contest

1/10/2013

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Bukang Liwayway January 22, 2013 at 4:05 AM so romantic..Congratulations on your win friend Russell. Hugs, maria

Ralph Taylor January 20, 2013 at 5:36 PM Congrats on your win, Russ - Ralph

Christopher Bunton January 20, 2013 at 12:38 PM Congratulations on your win!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 20, 2013 at 11:28 AM Congratulations on your top spot Russell xx

Poet Destroyer A January 20, 2013 at 10:01 AM Russell , :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice nice nine lines in Tracie's :-) " #9 " awesome contest... love always ~PD

Len Gasun January 19, 2013 at 7:20 PM Extremely beautiful! I love it. Congratulations on your big win my dear friend, Russell. love/hugs, Leonora

Wilma Neels January 11, 2013 at 7:43 AM This is a beautify Russell, absolutely love it :) wishing you the best of luck for Tracie's contest my friend.

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2013 at 7:26 PM hey, it kind of reminds me of the woman of the lake, in the King arthur story!!

Debra Squyres January 10, 2013 at 5:35 PM You've taken the simple theme of "9" to romantic heights !! What a lovely scene and heart felt poem you have here. I can picture her and feel her longing. Great write !!