Carol Mitra Poet Rhyme

Nine Dancers

Wings stretched fluttering around flowers
Like a halo they possess power
Nine butterflies in a show spellbound
Celebrating all of beauty found
Some fly slowly and some rather fast
That makes this warm feeling somehow last
These tender creatures with dainty wings
Glowing in the lamp, the sky now brings
Nine dancers flutter as my heart sings!


12.5.2021
Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner
Contest: A Time for Nine
Premier Contest Winner- Second Place

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Jan Allison May 21, 2021 at 6:31 AM This is so charming Carol, many congratulations on your win , hugs Jan x Carol Mitra May 21, 2021 at 7:20 PM Thanks dear Jan....much love :)

Beata Agustin May 20, 2021 at 11:09 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so delightful and delighting, especially the last three lines. God bless you. Carol Mitra May 21, 2021 at 12:11 AM Thanks dear Beata....much love :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler May 20, 2021 at 7:08 PM Congratulations on your win, Carol. This is exquisite! Evelyn Carol Mitra May 21, 2021 at 12:10 AM Thanks dear Evelyn....much love :)

Paula Goldsmith May 20, 2021 at 1:40 PM Back with "Congratulations on your win." I hope you and your butterflies will enjoy the win. Have a blessed day........ Carol Mitra May 20, 2021 at 6:09 PM Thanks dear Paula....I have joint in their dance :)

Christuraj Alex May 20, 2021 at 11:05 AM Congratulations! Carol Mitra May 20, 2021 at 6:08 PM Thanks dear Christuraj :)

Michelle Faulkner May 20, 2021 at 10:49 AM Carol, your butterflies are so graceful and delicate, loved the smooth flying rhymes here, congratulations and thank you for entering my contest! Carol Mitra May 20, 2021 at 6:08 PM Thank you dear Michelle...It was a joy to write and the butterflies did make my heart sing :)

Paula Goldsmith May 17, 2021 at 2:19 PM A beautiful butterfly write. I love butterflies. I love your line, "Nine dancers flutter as my heart sings!" Have a blessed day writing away................... Carol Mitra May 17, 2021 at 7:23 PM Thanks dear Paula.....yes whenever I see butterflies my heart sings indeed....so mesmerising :)

Andrea Dietrich May 12, 2021 at 10:41 PM Love how you did nine. I think this has a great chance to win. Carol Mitra May 12, 2021 at 11:13 PM Thanks dear Andrea....much love :)