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Nine Dancers

Wings stretched fluttering around flowers Like a halo they possess power Nine butterflies in a show spellbound Celebrating all of beauty found Some fly slowly and some rather fast That makes this warm feeling somehow last These tender creatures with dainty wings Glowing in the lamp, the sky now brings Nine dancers flutter as my heart sings! 12.5.2021 Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner Contest: A Time for Nine Premier Contest Winner- Second Place

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/21/2021 6:31:00 AM

This is so charming Carol, many congratulations on your win , hugs Jan x

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/21/2021 7:20:00 PM

Thanks dear Jan....much love :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/20/2021 11:09:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so delightful and delighting, especially the last three lines. God bless you.

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/21/2021 12:11:00 AM

Thanks dear Beata....much love :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/20/2021 7:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Carol. This is exquisite! Evelyn

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/21/2021 12:10:00 AM

Thanks dear Evelyn....much love :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/20/2021 1:40:00 PM

Back with "Congratulations on your win." I hope you and your butterflies will enjoy the win. Have a blessed day........

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/20/2021 6:09:00 PM

Thanks dear Paula....I have joint in their dance :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/20/2021 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations!

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/20/2021 6:08:00 PM

Thanks dear Christuraj :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/20/2021 10:49:00 AM

Carol, your butterflies are so graceful and delicate, loved the smooth flying rhymes here, congratulations and thank you for entering my contest!

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/20/2021 6:08:00 PM

Thank you dear Michelle...It was a joy to write and the butterflies did make my heart sing :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/17/2021 2:19:00 PM

A beautiful butterfly write. I love butterflies. I love your line, "Nine dancers flutter as my heart sings!" Have a blessed day writing away...................

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/17/2021 7:23:00 PM

Thanks dear Paula.....yes whenever I see butterflies my heart sings indeed....so mesmerising :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2021 10:41:00 PM

Love how you did nine. I think this has a great chance to win.

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/12/2021 11:13:00 PM

Thanks dear Andrea....much love :)