Sadaf Syed Poet Rhyme

Nine

He had asked me out on a date today
"Restaurant I know,but not the time",I sigh.
So standing in the corridor, signaled him in class
He threw me a paper and we waved bye.
There was number six written on it ,I rush 
To get ready quick and look beautiful to surprise.
I get there, wait until patience crossed the line,
Then angrily call him up when he doesn't show up.. 
Just to hear him say,"Baby,I meant nine!"

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Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2013 at 4:41 PM oh how cute the way you did a nine poem with this upside down six. Awesome!

Bukang Liwayway January 22, 2013 at 3:31 AM Congratulations on your awesome win.. I like it... ;) Good day!!

Ralph Taylor January 20, 2013 at 5:32 PM Congrats on your win, Sadaf. - Ralph

Christopher Bunton January 20, 2013 at 12:35 PM Congratulations on your win!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 20, 2013 at 11:28 AM Congratulations on your top spot Sadaf xx

Poet Destroyer A January 20, 2013 at 9:59 AM Sadaf , :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice nice nine lines in Tracie's :-) " #9 " awesome contest... love always ~PD

Irfana Ali Bhat January 20, 2013 at 5:57 AM A poem with a nice twist...congrats on ur win Sadaf...:))

Victoria Anderson-Throop January 20, 2013 at 3:42 AM the error 6 to 9 gives a nice poetic twist! well done

Len Gasun January 19, 2013 at 6:53 PM Congratulations on your big win my dear Sadaf! love/hugs, Leonora

Debra Squyres January 10, 2013 at 5:40 PM I like your punch line at the end !! I think she will have a hard time judging these poems, even with such simple rules to follow. This made me smile, a paper turned upside down..so sad too !! Enjoyed !!