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He had asked me out on a date today "Restaurant I know,but not the time",I sigh. So standing in the corridor, signaled him in class He threw me a paper and we waved bye. There was number six written on it ,I rush To get ready quick and look beautiful to surprise. I get there, wait until patience crossed the line, Then angrily call him up when he doesn't show up.. Just to hear him say,"Baby,I meant nine!"

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Date: 1/24/2013 4:41:00 PM
oh how cute the way you did a nine poem with this upside down six. Awesome!
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Date: 1/22/2013 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win.. I like it... ;) Good day!!
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Date: 1/20/2013 5:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sadaf. - Ralph
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Date: 1/20/2013 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/20/2013 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot Sadaf xx
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Date: 1/20/2013 9:59:00 AM
Sadaf , :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice nice nine lines in Tracie's :-) " #9 " awesome contest... love always ~PD
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Date: 1/20/2013 5:57:00 AM
A poem with a nice twist...congrats on ur win Sadaf...:))
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Date: 1/20/2013 3:42:00 AM
the error 6 to 9 gives a nice poetic twist! well done
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Date: 1/19/2013 6:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win my dear Sadaf! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 1/10/2013 5:40:00 PM
I like your punch line at the end !! I think she will have a hard time judging these poems, even with such simple rules to follow. This made me smile, a paper turned upside sad too !! Enjoyed !!
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