Nikko

Up and down
you spin me around
I'm taking it slow
but you've passed me up
Minutes and hours
and so far it's alright
even against accusing eyes
We walk the streets
without a care
ad we both wish
we were still there
One night stands out
above them all
when a little friend
came to call
Day in
Day out
words have come to mind
but I fell asleep
to something comfortable ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 18, 2009 at 7:15 AM
Awesome writing in this piece..well done.
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